Talk:Fernando Vásquez/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 06:27, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Almost there. 7-day hold to Krisgabwoosh. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:04, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

• Will pass. Pinging Krisgabwoosh again to see the numeral comment. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:32, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

• Should "Minister of Mining and Metallurgy" be capitalized in the first sentence?

• I tend to follow the style of not capitalizing titles if it comes after a person’s name (i.e. Joe Biden served as vice president of the United States). Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

• Ah, OK. That makes sense.

• 2019 to 202 , and as director missing a digit; drop the comma (User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences)

•  Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

• Don't italicize "Radio Fides Potosí" (radio station names don't get italics)

•  Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

• The minister of mining must publicly apologize". Full sentence — period in quote. MOS:INOROUT

•  Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

• ...remove the authority; one she complied with. "Remove the authority" sounds un-idiomatic; that should not be a semicolon; the trailing "with" is kind of meh here

• Changed to: "remove the minister. The president complied, and on 30 May, "

• Write "22" as a number

•  Done. Out of curiosity, what is Wikipedia's general style for when to and not to write out numbers vs. using numerals? Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

• Ah, turns out both are acceptable: MOS:NUMERAL. Integers greater than nine expressible in one or two words may be expressed either in numerals or in words (16 or sixteen, 84 or eighty-four, 200 or two hundred).

Other items

• Sources check out, and all references are archived.
• Earwig turns up no issues.
• Images need alt text.

•  Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 07:18, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.