Talk:Federal Bureau of Investigation/GA1

GA Reassessment

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I will be doing the GA Reassessment of this article as part of the GA Sweeps project.

Here are my concerns with this article:

There are six dead links, which include: 39, 38, 11, 24, 22, and 30. Also the ODMP link in the external links section is dead.
The "National Incident Based Reporting System" sub section has no in-line citations.
The Hiring Process sub section has two in-line citations, there should be more.
The "BOI and FBI directors" sub section also has no in-line citations.
The Organization section is sparsely referenced, as is the History section, including a ^{[citation needed]} on since April 2008.
The Lead is very undeveloped. This needs to be expanded per WP:LEAD. The lead is to be a summary of the entire article, touching on all aspects of the article in a summary fashion. The lead in this article is significantly lacking.

It is shame to delist this article as it should be a Good article, but considering the amount of work that needs to be done especially on the referencing. I don't see any other option. Please fully reference the article, fix the dead links, and expand the lead and renominate at WP:GAC. H1nkles (talk) 03:04, 7 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]