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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:00, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Soon... Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:00, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • indie rock band → genre is not needed
  • (2011). It was issued in the United States on July 26, 2011 as a digital download by Nettwerk. → (2011), with it being made available for digital download on July 26, 2011 through Nettwerk in the United States.
  • The single was written → The recording was written
  • received a mixed → remove "a"
  • Appreciated for its "catchiness" → While being appreciated for being catchy
  • a different reviewer was critical for the song containing → a different reviewer criticized the song for containing
  • A music video → An accompanying music video
  • and features → featuring

Background and composition

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  • with the news that a song → with news concerning a song
  • by Ivy → by the members of Ivy
  • assistance from → assistance being credited to
  • Described → Being described
  • pop" that → pop" vibe that
  • Keyboards accompany the song's melody → The recording incorporates keyboards in its instrumentation
  • chorus; PopMatters's → make two sentences here.

Critical reception

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  • came alongside a mixed → was met with mixed
  • and stated → stating that
  • Bergstrom from PopMatters → PopMatters's Bergstrom (word rep.)
  • He continued by questioning → The reviewer continued questioning
  • chorus' → refrain's

Music video

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  • A music video → An accompanying music video
  • 2011, via → Remove comma
  • The video was directed → The visual was directed (word rep.)
  • helped create → helped creating
  • the trio → the band
  • camera, as → remove comma
  • for the visual's entirety → for the rest of the clip
  • and ends → with it ending
  • individual using the keyboard → using the keyboard individually
  • vibe", through → remove comma

Track listings and formats

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  • Remove "and formats" from the title.

Credits and personnel

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  • Credits and personnel adapted from All Hours liner notes and Ivy's AllMusic discography → Credits adapted from the liner notes of All Hours and Ivy's discography on AllMusic

Release history

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  • Unlink label

Outcome

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 On hold for 7 days. Good luck with editing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:02, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: Finished with everything. Thanks so much! Carbrera (talk) 17:08, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Passing Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:31, 17 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]