Talk:Fakhr al-Mulk Ridwan/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 04:19, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
- The short description should go to the top of the article (MOS:ORDER).
- "giving them freedom" → "giving them the freedom"
- "as appanage" → "as an appanage"
- Remove the comma after "reach out to Tutush".
- Remove the comma after "28 August 1097".
- "Duqaq latter feared" → "Duqaq later feared"
- "give Ridwan an opportunity" → "allow Ridwan"
- Capitalize Sufis.
- Remove the comma after "lands surrounding Aleppo".
- Sort categories in alphabetical order.
Comments by Solavirum
[edit]Fixed everything till the alphabetization of the categories. 
- Note that most of the background section of the article shares similarity to this article's background section, which we touched upon here. --► Sincerely: Solavirum 20:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)