Talk:FU (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 05:33, 11 August 2014 (UTC)

Infobox

• Do not use a parent genre and subgenres in infobox at the same time- that is redundant

•  Done

Lead

• Citations are not needed here per WP:LEADCITE and belong in the body

•  Done

• Popdust (ref#3) is not a reliable source

• Removed it

• "It has been speculated by Catriona Wightman of Digital Spy to be inspired by Cyrus' former fiancé Liam Hemsworth"..... keep the detail on who speculated this in the body of the article, not here

•  Done

• Needs to mention detail on musical elements

•  Done

Background and Composition

• The picture of Liam really isn't needed

• Removed it

• The entire first paragraph belongs in Miley's main article, not here

• I incorporated this paragraph here as it has been used in the GA article of songs from Bangerz like Drive and 4x4

• "Montana explained to MTV News about how he ended up working with Cyrus"..... too lengthy, keep it simple with something like "Montana told MTV News about working with Cyrus", and a comma should be used rather than a hyphen

•  Done

• See above note regarding genres

•  Done

• "Entertainmentwise (ref#10) isn't a reliable source

• Ref #10 is Slant magazine. Ref #2 is Entertainmentwise and it has been used in GA articles of songs I mentioned above.

• "PopCrush" (ref#16) isn't a reliable source, and should not be italicized

• Removed the italics. Although it has been used in GA articles before. Do you want me to remove it?

Critical reception

• This giant paragraph should be split in half

•  Done

• "Heather Phares of AllMusic provided a favorable review"..... AllMusic should not be italicized as it is a non-print source, and gave a favorable review

•  Done

• "reviewed the song positively" → "praised the song"

•  Done

• See above note regarding PopDust

• Removed it

• Remove the comma from "Jason Lipshutz of Billboard, gave the song"

•  Done

• The A.V. Club should not be italicized as it is a non-print source

•  Done

• musicOMH should not be italicized as it is a non-print source

•  Done

• "Amy Winehouse and Skrillex, he further wrote" → "Amy Winehouse and Skrillex, writing"

•  Done

• Sputnikmusic should not be italicized as it is a non-print source

•  Done

• I'm not sure if "The Turn Magazine" is a reliable source

• I searched through WP:RS and there is nothing against it written there.

• See note above regarding PopCrush

• Do you want me to remove it? It's worth noting that it has been used in GA articles before.

• Digital Spy should not be italicized as it is a non-print source

•  Done

• It would be nice to have more comments from Catriona Wightman's review

•  Done She just speculated it to be inspired by Hemsworth and called it the best song of the album. So I mentioned that.

Live Performances

• The "p" should be in lowercases in "performances"

•  Done

• "Cyrus performed the song during her ongoing Bangerz Tour" → "Cyrus has performed the song during her Bangerz Tour"

•  Done

• "Critics praised her performance of the song"..... here you should go into what specifically critics said

•  Done

• Us Weekly (ref#26) isn't really the best of sources

• The designers gave an exclusive interview to them, that's why I included it in the article.

• "This incident lead to many outlets speculating that Cyrus and Gomez were feuding"..... doesn't really read well..... if including this, add detail on what specifically Cyrus and Gomez said in response and/or what such sources stated in their speculations

•  Done

References

• ref#2 (Digital Spy): publisher is Hearst Corporation

•  Done

• ref#4: link Los Angeles Times, and publisher is Eddy Hartenstein

•  Done

• ref#5 (The Observer): link Guardian Media Group

• This was already mentioned

• ref#6 (MTV): publisher is Viacom

•  Done

• ref#9: needs to be filled out completely

• It's already complete. What else has to be added?

• ref#14 (MTV): see note on ref#6

•  Done

• ref#16: not a reliable source

• Ref#16 is Billboard. It's not reliable?

• ref#17: link AllMusic, and publisher is All Media Network

•  Done

• ref#20 (Billboard): Prometheus Global Media is missing as publisher

•  Done

• ref#21 (The A.V. Club): publisher is The Onion, Inc.

•  Done

• ref#23: How is this reliable?

• Toronto Sun is definitely reliable

• ref#24 (MTV): "MTV Style" should read MTV and not be italicized, publisher is Viacom

•  Done

• ref#25: not a reliable source

• How?

• ref#27: Pittsburgh Post-Gazette should be italicized, and publisher is John Robinson Block

• It was already italicized. Included publisher.

• ref#28 (MTV): see note on ref#6

•  Done

• ref#29: needs to be filled out completely

•  Done

• ref#30 (AllMusic): All Media Network is missing as publisher

•  Done

• ref#31: needs to be filled out completely

•  Done

Charts

• Billboard needs to be italicized

•  Done

• If the Bubbling Under 100 and Canadian Hot 100 are included in both prose and table, how come Pop Digital Songs chart isn't included in the box as well when mentioned in text?

•  Done

GA Result

• Failing- too many MoS and prose issues in addition to malformated/questionable references

I fixed the errors. What else has to be added/ removed or corrected?