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Reviewer: VersaceSpace (talk · contribs) 16:41, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I'll start this momentarily. —VersaceSpace 🌃 16:41, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

This article is very well written, I have very few issues with it, which are as follows:

  • I think the RapReviews commentary could be safely removed as it's a non-notable publication, and the reviewer is employed by The Young Folks (not a notable publication either).
  • I think a Kanye picture without the MAGA hat would be more suitable in the 'release and reception' section.
I think a less divisive picture would be better, but if there's no alternative, I suppose this is fine. My fear is that to readers this might read as snide or "shady" towards Ye —VersaceSpace 🌃 19:16, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is there a reason why the website paramater of ref 28 says Billboard Pro and not just Billboard?
I'm aware of that fact, but is it not the same publication? I've never seen Billboard cited this way. —VersaceSpace 🌃 19:18, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Citations stand alone in their usage so I think the website names can be wiki-linked in every possible citation.
  • Is there something specific that the Hip hop-n-More cite is referencing, which is not being taken care of by the Highsnobiety citation? If not then ref 5 can be removed.

 On hold, but this is very good. —VersaceSpace 🌃 17:13, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

VersaceSpace Thanks for your comments, I have responded to them above. --K. Peake 19:07, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Kyle Peake: I've responded to (two of) yours. —VersaceSpace 🌃 19:19, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@VersaceSpace: I have replaced the photo of West with one I now found actually from 2019 after you elaborated on your point, however I'll elaborate on the Billboard one that Pro is only in brackets so isn't that acceptable? --K. Peake 19:38, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think "pro" should be in that parameter at all. The subscription is called Billboard Pro, but the website and publication are still just Billboard. That the subscription is named doesn't mean it's a part of the website's name. —VersaceSpace 🌃 19:50, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]