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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 20:29, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability  On hold

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous  On hold

Comments

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  • Expand the lead a bit
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:56, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The new company had 20,000 shares valued at twenty-five dollars each" - Link shares to Stock
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "2-mile (3.2 km) of river frontage" - I think there's a way to produce a plural using the template, you'll have to look at the documentation for that. Having miles instead of mile will improve the grammar.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:22, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "A blast furnace and a bar mill known as the Wyandotte Rolling Mill" - Link blast furnace, we don't seem to have an article for bar mill
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "that it consumed 50,000 cords of wood a year" - Link cords to Cord (unit)
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Probably best to link charcoal too, although I won't insist on this if you think it's an overlink.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:17, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Drop the quote from ref 1, it's not related to the statement ref 1 is citing.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:25, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Check worldcat for OCLCs, Woodford 2001 is new enough it might have an ISBN, especially since it's published by a university.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:08, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Consider adding an infobox. It's not necessary, but it would help with the article.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:56, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Placing on hold. This one's in really good shape, I'm gonna go ahead and assess it as B class for now.

@Hog Farm: - All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:57, 6 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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