Talk:Ethnochemistry

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Alternative Definition Sentence No. 2

I was bouncing back and forth on how I should word the second sentence, so here are the 3 ideas that I was thinking of:

Original: "An example of this is the bead makers of Ghana, a country in West Africa, where the artists know how to form and work the beads, but do not necessarily know the science (chemistry) behind the art."

Currant: "In the West African country of Ghana, an example of this are the bead makers who do not explain what they're doing in modern chemical terms, though they do explain the process in their own artistic way."

Alternative: "An example of this is the bead makers of Ghana, a country in West Africa, where the artists do not explain what they're doing in modern chemical terms, though they do explain the process in their own way."

Thoughts?

Jingham007 (talk) 01:47, 27 April 2018 (UTC)jingham007[reply]