Talk:Ester Peony/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:16, 27 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Done

"Peony started to compose music for Romanian artists before gaining recognition for her YouTube covers in 2015." - better; before gaining recognition for posting covers on YouTube in 2015.

Done

"There, she showed special interest in music " - how about showed a particular interest or a similarily worded sentence?

Done

"under her mononym Ester in the winter of 2014." - try to avoid using seasons in a time frame per MOS:SEASON

Done

"which was playlisted by native radio and television stations." - does the text in bold refer to national and/or local radio/television stations?

Done It refers to national stations; I changed that now.

Done

"In turn, the singer's first name Ester has an Arabic background could mean "star" in Old Persian " - that could mean

Done

This is nice and neat article on Peony. Nothing too major to be addressed in this review. MWright96 (talk) 13:02, 27 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thank you very much for the review :) I think I've addressed everything. Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:14, 4 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]