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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 06:38, 14 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this article.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:38, 14 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

He is, I'm stuck in two other reviews as well so give me a few days. Thanks Secret account 14:11, 14 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

WP:LEAD
Early life
Minor leagues

Been an over stressful week at work, nearly all my edits the past week came from an IPad in which I have at work, I will fix it by the concerns by this weekend. Secret account 18:04, 19 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Kansas City Royals (2011–present)
Personal life
File:Kansas City Royals first baseman Eric Hosmer.jpg needs {{personality rights}}--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:03, 20 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'm slowly working though your concerns, I did some early life expansion today, and I'm going to look at another source or two before finishing tomorrow or Monday. I will also do a quick expansion of the 2012 season, though not a game by game mention as it's frowned upon in our guidelines, and in WP:BASEBALL in particular. Thanks Secret account 05:56, 22 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think I took care of all your concerns, it might need a minor copyediting but that's about it, let me know of other concerns you have so I could take care of it quickly. Thanks Secret account 05:29, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

? Secret account 05:12, 25 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll join in the editing of this article by tomorrow. I'll see if there are any changes I think should be made. – Muboshgu (talk) 18:23, 27 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yes my schedule gotten much more busier lately, I"ll see if I could take care of concerns as well, but it looks like I might become inactive for a while. Secret account 20:18, 27 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Did File:Andy Fletcher, Vladimir Guerrero, Eric Hosmer.jpg get added later to the article. I don't know how I missed this before. It also needs {{personality rights}}.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:16, 3 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Done. I've never heard of that template before. – Muboshgu (talk) 15:46, 3 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for all the hard work. This article is quite improved. I am going to PASS it now.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:22, 4 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]