Talk:Emily Dorothea Pavy

A fact from Emily Dorothea Pavy appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 4 August 2023 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that in 1912, Emily Dorothea Pavy became the first recipient of the Catherine Helen Spence Scholarship?

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:05, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Pavy in 1906

... ~~that in 1912, Emily Dorothea Pavy (pictured) became the first recipient of the Catherine Helen Spence Scholarship, endowed to promote the study of sociology by women?~~ Source: https://www.google.com.au/books/edition/The_Building_of_Economics_at_Adelaide_19/fD0l9S5QUMwC?hl=en&gbpv=1&dq=Emily+Dorothea+Pavy&pg=PA10&printsec=frontcover
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Barcroft Boake (poet)
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Created by MaxnaCarta (talk). Self-nominated at 03:35, 3 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Emily Dorothea Pavy; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

Reviewing.. new enough, long enough, image free... will complete soon. Whispyhistory (talk) 05:31, 11 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

... MaxnaCarta...Thank you creating this interesting person. QPQ provided, no copyviop issues. Hook in article followed by a citation to reputable source containing hook fact. Are you able to shorten the hook or create a different one please. I also found this if helps. [1]. Whispyhistory (talk) 12:57, 12 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Whispyhistory: how about ...

ALT1...that in 1912, Emily Dorothea Pavy (pictured) became the first recipient of the Catherine Helen Spence Scholarship? — MaxnaCarta ( 💬 • 📝 ) 00:36, 17 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

... Hook is okay and cited appropriately. The article has much room for expansion, particularly her work on factory girls and time as Rowntree's assistant and therefore possibilty of a more interesting hook, if interested. Whispyhistory (talk) 15:11, 17 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback from New Page Review process

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for the interesting subject matter. A tiny nitpick that this ref somehow opens as a 404 error for me (though it may just be because of my browser). Thanks.

VickKiang (talk) 09:08, 3 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]