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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I can get this done in one day! --K. Peake 08:06, 3 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Shouldn't "Burbujas de Amor" be listed as another B-side in the infobox per the track listing?
  • Areíto Studios → 4:40 since that is the correct name and you don't use the term studios in infobox
  • "his sixth studio album" → "his sixth studio album,"
  • "The track is a" → "It is a"
  • Remove the introduction to Loketo since this is only needed in the body
  • Wikilink soukous to itself
  • "and Guerra performs it as" → "and is performed by Guerra as"
  • "It was released as" → "The song was released as" and make this the second sentence of this paragraph instead
  • In the second para, move the music video info to being after critical and commercial reception
  • "The accompanying music video for the song" → "The music video for the song"
  • "but it still received" → "despite still receiving"
  • Reword the award sentence to mentioning that it won the Tropical Song of the Year award at the 1993 Lo Nuestro Awards with the pipe
  • "in the US." → "in the United States." per MOS:US on the first being the first mention in the new order, also add that it was his first chart topper

Background and composition

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  • Pipe merengue to Merengue music on the audio sample text
  • Wikilink Juan Luis Guerra
  • Remove commas around Bachata Rosa
  • "as for music for" → "as music for" to avoid duplicate usage of for
  • "than the last one"." → "than the last one."" per MOS:QUOTE
  • Remove the comma after cha-cha-cha
  • "and song's composer" → "and song composer"
  • "in Guerra sings about" → "in which Guerra sings about"
  • "not Mitsubishi, not Chevrolet"." → "not Mitsubishi, not Chevrolet."" with the pipe
  • "a measure of coffee"" → "a measure of coffee"."
  • "He also makes references" → "Guerra also makes references"

Music video

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  • "The news monitors behind the singer depicts" either change to the news monitor if it is only one or to depict if you mean multiple monitors
  • Remove the comma after Chilean military dictatorship
  • "The video also intersperses with scenes" → "This content is interspersed with scenes"
  • "in the category" → "in the category of"
  • Pipe 5th Annual Lo Nuestro Awards to Premio Lo Nuestro 1993
  • "It was nominated" → "It was nominated for"
  • Fix the misspelling of international on the award's name

Promotion and reception

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  • "was released as album's" → "was released as the album's"
  • Wikilink greatest hits album
  • Allmusic → AllMusic with the wikilink
  • "boundaries of salsa" citing" → "boundaries of salsa", citing"
  • "The Boston Globe reviewer Fernando Gonzalez" → "The Boston Globe reviewer Fernando Gonzalez" with the wikilink
  • "Despite the latter's concern," → "Despite the editor's concern,"
  • Add a full-stop after Tropical Song of the Year
  • "It was recognized as" → "The track was recognized as"

Track listing

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  • Shouldn't the titles be surrounded by speech marks?

Charts

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Weekly charts

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Year-end charts

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

References

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Final comments and verdict

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