Talk:Egyptian Arabian (horse)

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Cleanup[edit]

This translation from French needs a lot of cleanup. Apart from what I've already cleaned up, here are some things that need attention:

Pyramid Society doesn't need to be italicized (18 instances)
Overlinking: Repeat linking to each coat color article is unnecessary
Excess wikilinks; WP:EASTEREGGs; 5 links to World Arabian Horse Organization
Images: too many images are simply decorative, see MOS:IMAGERELEVANCE; not all are positioned where they are helpful to a reader
Image captions: few image captions need detail such as the horse's name, the horse show, the stud name and location, or the date
Translation: Needs a good cleanup from a native English speaker. For example: "revolting eyes", "The spread of breeding"
Consistency: Flips back and forth between calling a specific person "Abbas Pasha" and "Abbas I Hilmi" (for Abbas I of Egypt). Pick one consistent form. Also mentions once each "Abbasids" and "Abbas II Hilmi" -- who are they?
Sources: Numerous Harv warnings such as "There is no link pointing to this citation". There are many "sources" which should be "further reading" as they are not referenced in this article.
2 uncited instances related to DAD-IS. WP:OR? See Talk:DAD-IS#Evaluation concludes DAD-IS is generally unreliable for horse topics

▶ I am Grorp ◀ 16:53, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]