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Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk) 13:12, 13 August 2011 (UTC) Looks very good, but I have a few comments:[reply]

Early life

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State politics

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  • Maybe some brief explanation of Australian federation would be useful to non-Australians in understanding the politics of the era. Just a sentence or two, nothing too elaborate.
  • "...elected in the second position" Are these multi-member districts? Some explanation, again, would help the non-Australian.

Minister for Repatriation

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  • You might want to explain the job of the Minister for Repatriation. Was it just about demobilization, or did he deal with veterans afterward, too?

I'll get to the rest of these on the weekend. Frickeg (talk) 12:16, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

OK. I probably won't be able to review them until then, anyway. --Coemgenus (talk) 12:53, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Other issues

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