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I have begun work on changing this article and making it more neutral by rephrasing some of the more subjective praises of A Martinez's and Marcy Walker's acting abilities (Yes I agree that they are exceptional actors, but you have to make the praise of them more neutral by saying things like " A Martinez and Marcy Walker were praised for their acting ability during such and such a storyline", rather than "A. Martinez and Marcy Walker showed their amazing acting ability during such and such a storyline". I have not finished yet though. Dippit 12:50, 28 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

oh and even though the final two paragraphs are not really in keeping with the tone of Wikipedia (I strongly suspect it is the final two paragraphs that got the article tagged to be checked for neutrality) I will leave them here to see what others want to do with them. Dippit 13:09, 28 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I have added a significant amount of content to this page and have divided up the entry in sections. I have also tried to get a more neutral tone to the article. I am not done yet. I still have the last two sections to do. It is easy for me to be neutral on this subject because although I was a big fan of Santa Barbara, I was not a Cruz and Eden fan. I was/am an Mason Capwell/Lane Davies fan. Cruz and Eden (A Martinez and Marcy Walker) had a huge impact on the other characters/actors on the show. And the article should reflect that. However, it should do so from a neutral point of view. --madinirose 22:56, 20 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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