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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 01:16, 23 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I will review, comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 01:16, 23 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • There, he flew in F-86 Sabre and F-100 Super Sabre squadrons. The previous sentence states he was assigned to the 22nd Day Fighter Squadron. Should the word squadrons appear in the highlighted sentence? It seems to me that it should be replaced with fighters or aircraft. Same applies to the Military service section as well.

Early life

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Up to Nasa career, more to come. Zawed (talk) 20:30, 25 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nasa career

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More to come. Zawed (talk) 22:33, 25 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Isn't this outside your usual area of interest? Asking in case I need a reviewer for an astronaut article in the future. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:08, 26 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have been interested in the Mercury-Gemini-Apollo programs since reading Andrew Chaikin's book when I was first year uni. I know you have been working on this topic for a few year and have been meaning to get involved on the reviewing side for a while. Zawed (talk) 03:02, 26 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Continuing with review:

Awards and Honours

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Memorials

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Other stuff

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  • Dupe links: Mercury Seven, extravehicular activity, White House, NASA Exceptional Service Medal
  • Image tags look OK

That's it for me. Zawed (talk) 03:46, 26 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 04:51, 26 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good, passing as GA. Zawed (talk) 06:49, 26 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]