Talk:Eastern Air Lines Flight 512/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 06:59, 24 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Be consistent with Eastern Air Lines versus Eastern Airlines (the latter is used in the description of the airplane)
Link Douglas DC-7B in the description of the airplane
The lead contains some details I'm not seeing in the body - the mentions of sand and the distance of 200 yards
". One of the plane's wings struck the ground" - not seeing where this is mentioned in the body
"Emergency equipment responded, but rescuers were delayed by the thick fog and the soft terrain" - recommend "Emergency crews ...", to avoid anthropomorphizing the equipment
", the pilots descended to as low as 25 feet above the ground" - provide a conversion to meters here
Image licensing is fine
sources are all reliable and formatted well enough

Placing on hold; this one's in pretty good shape and shouldn't take too much work to bring up to GA status. Hog Farm _Talk 00:15, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the look. I've addressed the issues in this list as well. Let me know if you see anything else. RecycledPixels (talk) 04:03, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]