Talk:Dwight's Speech/GA1
GA Review
[edit]GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- I think the second paragraph should be expanded a little. Only by a sentence or two. The sentence about Rolling Stone should use The Office's, not The Office's
- Done and done --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 22:19, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
- I think the second paragraph should be expanded a little. Only by a sentence or two. The sentence about Rolling Stone should use The Office's, not The Office's
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- "This episode was the second episode of the series directed by series creator Charles McDougall. McDougall had previously directed the second season episode "Christmas Party"." Needs a references and isn't Greg Daniels the creator? I don't see a reference for the air date. The reference for Paul Lieberstein says that he plays Toby, if he wrote the episode, that needs a reference as well.
- Corrected --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 22:19, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
- "This episode was the second episode of the series directed by series creator Charles McDougall. McDougall had previously directed the second season episode "Christmas Party"." Needs a references and isn't Greg Daniels the creator? I don't see a reference for the air date. The reference for Paul Lieberstein says that he plays Toby, if he wrote the episode, that needs a reference as well.
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- No TV Ratings info?
- Added --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 22:19, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
- No TV Ratings info?
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Full stop after "Dwight delivers his passionate speech"
- I'm sorry, what are you asking me to do? --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 22:19, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
- A period after "Dwight delivers his passionate speech". I corrected it.
- I'm sorry, what are you asking me to do? --Mr.crabby ''''' (Talk) 22:19, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
- Full stop after "Dwight delivers his passionate speech"
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- I'm holding the article for now, but if these points can be address, i'll pass it.
- Pass or Fail:
