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Reviewer: Fearstreetsaga (talk · contribs) 19:35, 28 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The article covers the book well and I like how it is structured. Here are my suggestions:

Development and publication
  • "as I believe I've mentioned earlier" I think this part should be removed given that it adds little to the quote.
  • "I am working on two (2) new books" This is already mentioned in the paragraph preceding it.
    • I agree with both of the above points—these phrases are restatements that add little-to-no new information. I've removed the quoted sentence that contained both phrases.
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