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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Doug Fisher (American football)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 17:32, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Notes

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  • Added Category:Junior college men's track and field athletes in the United States
  • Changed defensive tackle cat to linemen since aricle doesn't mention tackle
  • "He placed high in several tournaments and set divisional records in the sport" Source only says he set one record. Also, doesnt say anything about tournaments.
    • Reworded sentence.
  • Is CCJCAA the correct abbreviation? When I google that, this article is the first thing that appears.
    • There seem to be several different names for it - this source (the one used in that part) calls it the CCJCAA - there's some others calling it that.
  • "all-conference selection" Is that the CCJCAA selection in the infobox?
    • Yes - should I reword it?
  • All-Coast means Pacific Coast Athletic Association right? I suggest pipelinking it in the article and infobox
    • Appears so - linked.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 17:32, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 23:34, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]