Talk:Doro (musician)/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: JayJay (talk · contribs) 22:42, 20 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I will start the review soon. JayJay^{What did I do?} 22:42, 20 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Quick Comments

I see the article has a tag at the top claiming it has an excessive or improper use of non-free media, I see no problems though so you can remove the tag. References number 11 and 13 the websites no longer exist so that should be taken care of that. In the section Doro in Europe (1991-1999), the sentence in the first paragraph says "which contains several ballads and has a very intimate and bluesy feel" I would get rid of that because it does not have a neutral view. Also in the same section paragraph 3 starts off 'Returned in the US after the European tour,' re-word it, confusing. Also paragraph 5 in the same section starts off 'She signed a worldwide contract with the major record label WEA' replace She with Doro. Other than that there is no other issues.

Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
Waiting for refs 11 and 13 to be fixed Done
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
waiting for Doro in Europe (1991-1999) to be fixed Done fixed it myself as it was only a minor issue
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
I will give you 7 days to clean up the issues above Done

Thank you for your quick and positive review. And now to the next... Lewismaster (talk) 19:58, 21 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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