Talk:Don't Stand Another Chance/GA1
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Reviewer: Pixelyoshi (talk · contribs) 20:34, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
Hi, Alex ! I'll be the reviewer. I fixed some minor issues. Πx (discuter) 20:34, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
Overview
[edit]Prose: See below OK
Sourcing: See below OK
Coverage: See below OK
Neutrality: OK
Stability: OK
Details
[edit]- Lead
"It was written by Janet Jackson, her brother Marlon Jackson and musician John Barnes, while Marlon also produced it, and provided backing vocals along with his brothers Michael, Tito, and Jackie." It's too long ! => I suggest you, "It was written by Janet Jackson, her brother Marlon Jackson and musician John Barnes. Marlon also produced it, and provided backing vocals along with his brothers Michael, Tito, and Jackie."
- Background
Done
- Reception
"Phil Hardy in the book The Da Capo Companion to 20th-century Popular Music stated that "Don't Stand Another Chance" was not much better than dance club ready-songs." => "Phil Hardy wrote in the book... that...". Additionnally, is it a citation ?
- Live performances
Remove "held in New Orleans, Louisiana"
- Credits and personnel
John Barnes is the songwriter not the producer.
- References
ref#9 : the source doesn't state that.ref#16 : link Dream Street
- Coverage/other issues
- Do you have any details about the song's composition ? lyrics ? genre ? etc.
GA Result: ✓ Pass
On hold for seven days Πx (discuter) 20:34, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
- All done. Details about its composition, although deeply searched by me, were not found. Alex talk page! 19:59, 13 September 2014 (UTC)
- OK. If you find more details about composition, add them to the article. Πx (discuter) 17:51, 15 September 2014 (UTC)