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GA Review

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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk · contribs) 22:09, 7 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]


GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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One image has a problem File:Dolph Overton 2009.JPG
Already fixed that. I assumed the bot would take the template down. Done. —Ed!(talk) 19:44, 9 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Some disamb links need attention Number 13, Distinguished Flying Cross, Tail number, Captain (military) (redirect page) and Captain
Fixed. —Ed!(talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
In the First Korean War tour section Overton flew 102 combat missions over the course of a 6-month year tour. whats a 6 month year tour and should it be six
Fixed. —Ed!(talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
In the Second Korean War tour section He also believed any number with a three in it, including the number 13. - is there something missing off the end of the sentence
Fixed. —Ed!(talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Note 2 needs a cite
Fixed. —Ed!(talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Well done, interesting guy, just a few small points. Jim Sweeney (talk) 19:52, 9 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your review! —Ed!(talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]