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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 10:27, 18 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Will begin this soon JAGUAR  10:27, 18 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • The lead should mention how many athletes Djibouti had in the games
    • The lead already says five athletes, first line second paragraph. Kees08 (talk)
  • "Djibouti's one and only medal prior to these Games was a bronze awarded to Hussein Ahmed Salah" - the source says it was silver
    • Annoyingly, that source is wrong; it is a bronze. I'll find another source. Source replaced. Kees08 (talk)
  • "Djibouti had two athletes qualify for athletics at this Olympics, one male and one female. Mumin Gala qualified for the 5000m run and Zourah Ali qualified for the 400m run." - needs a citation. And the 'm' abbreviation should read as metre
  • "Djibouti's National Olympic Committee (NOC), Comité National Olympique Djiboutien," - is there any need for this? I think it could be removed
  • "An NOC can to enter up to three qualified athletes" - A
  • "Gala finished the first heat with a time of 13:21.21, finishing 10th in his heat" - repetition of heat
  • "Zourah competed in the 400m race" - 400 metre
  • Remove the "NA" and "N/R" lines from the key as they're not mentioned in the tables
  • No dead links
  • Do dab links

All issues addressed, let me know if you need anything else. Kees08 (talk) 14:53, 18 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I spotted a few minor errors but other than that this article is quite solid and won't require much more to push this to a GA standard. I'll leave this on hold until everything is clarified! JAGUAR  13:20, 18 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Promoted JAGUAR  15:41, 18 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]