Talk:Djibouti at the 2000 Summer Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 04:12, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 04:12, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
A few minor mistakes...
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- Citations are inconsistent. Some dates have different formats and some publishers are missing in some citations. Use the "External links" link in the "GA Toolbox" sidebar to find the mistakes.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Expanded recently (Beginning on January 1).
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
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Comments
[edit]- Soul -> Seoul
- Be consistent with the linking of the cities (Seoul and Barcelona).
- "As of 2000" is kinda redundant.
- "She set a new record for her nation upon competing, being the youngest athlete to represent Djibouti, at the age of 16 years and 162 days.[7] She was also the first female to represent Djibouti in the Olympic games.[8] She competed in the second heat of the women's 800 metres on 22 September. She finished last in the heat of eight athletes, with a time of two minutes and 31.74 seconds." More sentence variety needed (at least don't started consecutive sentences with "She").
- @CycloneIsaac: Fixed everything --Cameron11598 (Talk) 23:38, 1 January 2017 (UTC)