Talk:Divine Intervention (Slayer album)/GA1
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Reviewer: --CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 01:15, 5 November 2010 (UTC)
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[edit]- the first Slayer album featuring -> their first
- Several of the songs on the album were inspired by television -> what does this mean?
- The production posed as a challenge to the record company, as its marketing situation drew arguments -> If your going to write that you need to tell us why. You just made a statement and cut us off
- Vocalist -> vocalist
- said that the production was paid more attention -> ?
- The cover was painted and designed by Wes Benscoter, who was filmed while doing his work -> not well-written
Overall
[edit]- This article has allot of grammar issues and should be thoroughly re-written. Additionally, there is no chart even though it did enter the charts in some countries. The personnel section is not sourced. There is no "Chart performance section"
- This article needs allot of work.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 04:21, 24 November 2010 (UTC)