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Reviewer: Novice7 (talk) 11:42, 10 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Good work! Here are some minor issues:-

Lead
  • three on the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs. The song received a gold certification.. — The song "also" received a gold certification.  Done Jivesh boodhun (talk) 18:55, 10 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • the song appeared on charts in Australia, Ireland, the Netherlands.. — the song appeared on "the" charts in..  Done Jivesh boodhun (talk) 18:55, 10 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Its Melina-directed music video shows the singer and backup dancers in a warehouse, and it presents choreography similar to that of "Single Ladies (Put A Ring On It)." — confusing. Change to something like Its music video, directed by Melina, shows the singer and backup dancers in a warehouse, and it presents choreography similar to that of "Single Ladies (Put A Ring On It).". Also, it presents "a" choreography..  Done Jivesh boodhun (talk) 18:55, 10 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Background and release
Composition
No, it's not fixed. Novice7 (talk) 07:42, 11 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Now  Done

Critical reception
Charts and live performances
Not fixed. And, that sentence sounds trivial to me. Novice7 (talk) 07:42, 11 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Now  Done

Music video
  • The screenshot has VEVO logo. Can you upload a one without the logo? .......  Done by Adabow
  • The opening definition of "diva" has been changed to feature the pronunciation of the word as "bē-yän-sá"; — if you mean "bē-yän-sá", it is the pronunciation of "Beyonce". Change the sentence.  Done Jivesh boodhun (talk) 18:55, 10 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Track listing
References and links
Media
  • Except for the screenshot, the media files are of fair quality and meets the standards.

Very well done! Needs fixes. Putting on Hold. Novice7 (talk) 16:56, 10 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Last, is the link to Myspace needed? I say just Beyonce's official website link is enough. Novice7 (talk) 07:42, 11 December 2010 (UTC) Now  Done[reply]
All done! Passing. Novice7 (talk) 08:04, 11 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]