Talk:Digging Your Scene/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 07:40, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

as the second single from the parent record → remove "single" here

Done

where several of whom agreed it would succeed → with several agreeing it would succeed

Done – Yes, this is much better :). Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

and number 14 → and at number 14

Done

reached number nineteen → reached number 19

Done

American band Ivy created a cover → You may better use "recorded" here, as "created" sounds not ok

Done

Release year for Guestroom in brackets

Done

Infobox

The second release date in the infobox may be overfluous

Done – I forgot to remove it before nominating it ;). Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Composition and lyrics

with influence from from → one "from" is enough ;)

Done

he worries: "Tell me → : to ,

Done

Release year for She Was Only a Grocer's Daughter in brackets

Done

He wrote: "Dr. Robert → : to ,

Done

Critical reception

a programmer for Billboard → a programmer from Billboard

Done

that its sound → state "the song" or smth else here as you're introducing a new subtopic

Done

Chart performance

In the lead, you say the single peaked at number 19 in the UK

Done

second highest peaking single → second-highest peaking single

Done

number 5 → only numbers up to ten are written like this; number five

Done

also peaked at number sixteen → also peaked at number 16

Done

number 7 mark → number seven mark

Done

thirteenth week on Canada's → 13th week on Canada's

Done

numbers sixteen → numbers 16

Done

twenty-five and twenty-three → 25 and 23

Done

Music video

was released sometime in 1986 → remove "sometime"; 1986 is enough here

Done

Music & Media Conference, that took place → no comma here

Done

Track listings and formats

flawless ;)

Charts

flawless ;)

Release history

use "rowspan="2" for RCA

Done

Promotion and use in media

This section should be moved after "Music video"

Done

other is flawless ;)

Ivy version

Background and development

coos lines like: "I'm like a boy → : to ,

Done

Infobox

Isn't there any cover for this version?

That's weird, isn't it? Ivy's official catalog lists it as a CD single, but with my educated guess it may have been packaged with a similar cover as seen on "Edge of the Ocean". However, since I can't find any confirmation I'm not gonna add an image :(.

Critical reception

version. He wrote: "Durand's → version, writing, "Durand's

Done

so natural...if you → ... to [...]

Done

Track listing

flawless ;)

Release history

flawless ;)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

9.9% is super!

Images

Perfectly illustrated by images ;)

Links

No problems here!

References

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article (I can't verify some things, but I trust you ;))
No dead links! Good job!!

Outcome

On hold for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:35, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: Wow you're fast! Thanks so much again for the review. Always is appreciated. Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

- Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:58, 31 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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