Talk:Destination X (2005)
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:18, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:18, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
- Wonderful, I got a good reviewer.--WillC 21:09, 7 October 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "which he has sustained" had sustained.
- "whoever the winning team represented," no comma needed here.
- "building, when" building. When
- "The second stage was a Three Way match," no comma needed
- "B.G James," B.G.
Just a bit of copyediting needed. I'll put the article on hold and pass when it's fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:58, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
- Comment – Fixed the grammar and punctuation errors. Del♉sion23 (talk) 00:50, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
- I believe they are all fixed now.--WillC 01:23, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
- Looks good; article passed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:10, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
- Nice, and thanks for the review man.--WillC 06:40, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- Looks good; article passed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:10, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
- I believe they are all fixed now.--WillC 01:23, 14 October 2011 (UTC)