Talk:Derek Dougan/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:30, 21 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"a 4–0 win over Fulham, which began a sequence of five wins and a draw from Rovers's first six matches," - reptition of win(s)
- Done.--Echetus Xe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"the dourness of the club matched that of the town.I " - needs to be spaced out
- Done.--Echetus Xe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"The move did though have it's benefits" - its
- Done.--Echetus Xe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

""Foxes" to a seventh-place finish." - I think team would be better than the club's nickname
- Done.--Echetus Xe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"who quit the game to become a full-time Jehovah's Witness volunteer." - left
- Done.--Echetus Xe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Delink Portugal, Hungary, Italy and the Netherlands per WP:OVERLINK
- Done.--Echetus Xe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"Spurs" goalkeeper Pat Jennings putting in an excellent performance " - exellent is NPOV
- Done.--Echetus Xe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"but managed to deny Leeds United the championship by beating Leeds on the final day of the season to prevent them from reaching Derby County's point tally," - reptition of Leeds
- Done.--Echetus Xe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Do we know what was the name of the half-hour show he presented on BBC Radio Birmingham?
- No.--Echetus Xe 11:06, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

On hold until the above points have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 08:20, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Links in red for seasons still untidy, will attend to them at some point unless someone else has a fast way to do it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 1.152.107.52 (talk) 15:21, 16 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]