Talk:Decompression (diving)/GA1

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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 15:44, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'll be reviewing this article. Comments will come soon.Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 15:44, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Tomandjerry211, Glad to have you reviewing, I will be away for a few days on business next week, so if there is a lack of response from me for a few days it may mean I am busy or without internet access. Cheers, • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 19:33, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I am back. • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 08:47, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues:

No need to put a citation before you put the exact same citation near the end. It looks like this: William Howard was a dentist.[10] He was born in 1980. [10]

I will check for occurrences and rectify as appropriate. • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 19:51, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I found one instance. It was in a paragraph where two significantly different concepts needed citation, and coincidentally were referenced by the same source, not necessarily on the same page. It is my opinion that both statements could be reasonably required to be referenced, and that citing the same source twice in the paragraph is justified in this case. • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 20:28, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Order your citations correctly. Not like: [29][10]

I didn't know that is a requirement. I will look into it. • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 19:51, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I can't find the requirement, can you link to it please? • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 20:16, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Add a few more cites.

For what?• • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 19:51, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It's not necessary. Same applies with the preceding query.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 10:51, 17 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

No need to put citations in the lead.

No harm either from what I have read. I will remove any that I find redundant. • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 19:51, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I took out two. The only one left is for Taravana, which is not yet in the body. I will fix that soon.• • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 21:16, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

done • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 16:49, 13 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The lead seems long in comparison with the article. Are you sure everything in the lead is in the article?

I think so, I will check • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 19:51, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I have added some content on decompression sickness, which was mentioned in the lead and omitted from the body. I still need to get the references.

Refs added. • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 16:49, 13 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I suggest you put citations after punctuation, if possible.

I will do that where appropriate • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 19:51, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

done, those which remain in mid-sentence are there to clearly indicate what they support. • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 21:16, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

U.S. Navy link is dead.

Which US Navy link is dead? • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 19:51, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

OK, Found it. Can do. • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 19:54, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

done • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 20:16, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 17:59, 12 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Passing, Well done!--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 10:54, 17 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your input, Cheers, • • • Peter (Southwood) ^(talk): 06:49, 18 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]