Talk:Death Has a Shadow/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 21:19, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

plot

• asleep on the kitchen table the next morning. Lois. Dose something seem wrong here, change the next morning after the perioed.
  • Done. Gage (talk) 22:21, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

Other things

• take out the see also the links are alredy in the episode.
  • Done. Gage (talk) 22:21, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

Thats all i can see every thing else is fine, nice job.--Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 21:19, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

Pass.--Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 22:39, 25 October 2009 (UTC)