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Mayor

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Pretty slim article for new mayor of SF.

doesn’t seem right that voters wouldn’t have gotten much information here when they voted! 2601:645:C601:6010:804A:E623:9E25:EE36 (talk) 00:35, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Article lacks encyclopedic tone

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Many sections of this article are repetitive, grammatically awkward, or not written to the standard of an encyclopedic tone. Somebody with experience in this should read through the entire article and improve the tone and grammar to meet Wikipedia's style standards. Nicolás Macri (talk) 00:47, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed - seems like it's a bit one-sided too, it is not really saying anything about his experience, it's talking about all the positive things he's done. Could use a more rounded perspective. 2601:646:200:CED0:484C:7781:F3EF:D58A (talk) 08:23, 1 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The whole thing looks like it was written with LLM-generated text by someone asking an AI to summarize news articles. Liriodendron93 (talk) 21:25, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It reads like an ad, rather than a description of a mayor, especially the policy section (though I imagine that can be changed as his term goes on). 100.19.141.173 (talk) 01:18, 22 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: Urban Politics

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 27 August 2024 and 13 December 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Malloryprimeau, Mill3853, WildWoof (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by SarahReckhow (talk) 16:40, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]