Talk:Cyprus in the Eurovision Song Contest 2003/GA1

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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 17:02, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Happy to review this article.

Review

Lead section/infobox

Unlink Latvia (as Riga is linked next to it)
himself is redundant

Done Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

1 Background

Link Yiannis Dimitrou ('Γιάννης Δημητράς' In the Greek Wikipedia, using {{ill|Yiannis Dimitrou|el|Γιάννης Δημητράς}}

Done Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

2.1 Internal selection

Link Riga; lyricist

Done Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

2.2 Promotion

Link V2 Records; Greek (Greek language)
Spain's Eurovision preparations – typo?
Link CD single in the caption

Done - I removed the 's' from preparations. It can be plural too and make sense, but I don't mind it being singular either. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

3 At Eurovision

Omit Latvia in Riga, Latvia (not needed, as it is already stated in the article)
Link backing vocalist
Amend was slightly injured during the first rehearsal, though they were able to to ‘who was slightly injured during the first rehearsal, was able to’, to improve the prose
following the entry from Croatia and preceding the entry from Germany seems over detailed, happy if you want to keep it in for consistency
in position nine – 'ninth' sounds better imo
Unlink postcard - it leads to a single sentence in another article. I would include the information there in a note in this article, or within the text of this section.
Unlink football (common term)

Done I did tweak the injury sentence a bit more than you suggested. I liked having football linked because European football is definitely not the common term for me. I removed the link regardless though. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

3.1 Voting

had placed 20th – 'had been placed 20th'

Done Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

4 References

Ref 2 – a source for the 2007 edition of O’Connor is available here (p.113), it might be useful to you and/or other readers if this source was used instead of the one stated
Ref 17 – it might be useful if the Greek title was translated (minor point)
Ref 18 (Eurovision Song Contest 2003. Riga, Latvia. 24 May 2003.) - cannot be verified

Done Removed ref 18 as it was only supplemental. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

5 Further reading

The title of this section should be Sources (or something similar). As O’Connor is cited, Further reading is incorrect

Done Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

On hold

Nice work. I'm putting the article on hold for a week until 12 January to allow time for the issues raised to be addressed. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 10:05, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Amitchell125: Thanks for the review! I believe I've addressed most of your concerns. My individual comments are above. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Passing

Great stuff, passing the article now. Amitchell125 (talk) 16:57, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]