Talk:Crybaby (Mariah Carey song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pixelyoshi (discuter) 17:50, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this article Pixelyoshi (discuter) 17:50, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

Background and composition

• "guitar and guitar"
• "from the low note of an E₃ to the high note of F♯₅"
• Any tempo ?

I will continue tomorrow Pixelyoshi (discuter) 18:25, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

Fixed. As for the tempo, I'm afraid not.

Controversy

• "became the center of conflict..." → "became the center of a conflict..."
• "The differences in opinion" → "These different opinions" should be better

Done.

Reception

• "wrote that on the song 'Mariah amazes', also calling the song 'Snoop Dogg enhanced'..." overuse of "song"

Done.

Live performances

• Only one performance ? In this case, remove the 's'

The song was performed throughout the Rainbow Tour. Should the 's' be removed?

Credits and personnel

• Could you add more credits from Rainbow (like CTTAMT) ?

Done.

FINISH ! On hold for even days Pixelyoshi (discuter) 19:52, 18 April 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing. Novice7 (talk) 03:45, 20 April 2011 (UTC)

OK, I'm passing it Pixelyoshi (discuter) 10:00, 20 April 2011 (UTC)