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Is there a supporter politicians section for Sarah Palin
New Scientist magazine declared Munger as one of the "3 non-scientists who deserve special mention" at "Science heroes and villains of 2008" "for doing his bit to counter creationism" by confirming US Republican nominee for vice president Sarah Palin's beliefs on "dinosaurs and humans coexisted 6000 years ago". [1]
In his September 28, 2008 article titled, "Palin treads carefully between fundamentalist beliefs and public policy", Stephen Braun stated, after Sarah Palin elected as mayor of Wasilla, Alaska, she startled University of Alaska Anchorage musical teacher and local resident Munger who "regularly criticized" Palin in recent years on his "liberal political blog called Progressive Alaska" by her creationism beliefs during their casual conversation, which are related to the "popular strain of creationism" which claims the "Young Earth" that God created about 6,000 years ago and where both dinosaurs and humans coexisted, while most scientists say 65 millions years of time passed after extinction of dinosaurs over earth and first primitive humans. In June 1997, after watching her speech in a graduation ceremony for small group of home-schooled students at the Assembly of God, where the college band playing was conducted by Munger, he asked her "Sarah, how can you believe in creationism -your father's a science teacher" she replied they "don't have to agree on everything". And after he "pushed her on the earth's creation, whether it was really less than 7,000 years old and whether dinosaurs and humans walked the earth at the same time" about prehistoric fossils and tracks dating back millions of years, she replied yes, "she'd seen images somewhere of dinosaur fossils with human footprints in them" which means dinosaurs and humans walked the Earth at the same time, against scientific views, according to Munger.[2][3] While Bill McAllister, Palin's chief spokesman as governor, claimed "he never heard Palin make such remarks about dinosaurs and that Palin preferred not to discuss her views on evolution publicly."[2] Munger further claimed he asked Palin if she believed the doomsday scenario which Messiah will return while earth is in total chaos, called End of Days, "She looked in my eyes and said, 'Yes, I think I will see Jesus come back to earth in my lifetime.'" [3]
I created paragraph for another article. Will it be any use. Kasaalan (talk) 13:27, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- I don't really think it belongs here, as Palin isn't prominent as a creationist (making it more than a little off-topic & WP:COATRACKy). HrafnTalkStalk(P) 14:32, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- Actually no coatrack, and creationism supporter policitians should be addressed somewhere. Kasaalan (talk) 14:54, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- Not in this article -- there are too many of them, and they're too peripheral (compared with the likes of Price, Rimmer, Morris & Ham) to the main topic. The logical way to handle them is to place them into Category:Creationists and/or mention their creationism in their own articles. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 15:01, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- Or to put it another way, unless and until somebody rates a solid mention in The Creationists, there's very little chance of them getting a mention here. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 15:05, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- Actually no coatrack, and creationism supporter policitians should be addressed somewhere. Kasaalan (talk) 14:54, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- That said, I think there's room for a daughter article that discusses "creationism is American politics" (and other countries, as warranted). Guettarda (talk) 15:14, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- Politics of creationism recently got redirected to Creation and evolution in public education due to the lack of non-overlapping on-topic information. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 15:48, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- A list based article would be nice. Kasaalan (talk) 15:24, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- I would see no problem with that. It'd be somewhat of a herculean effort to get a reasonable level of coverage though (see Creation and evolution in public education, Intelligent design in politics & Academic Freedom bills for some of the players). HrafnTalkStalk(P) 15:48, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- I would recommend starting any such list in user space, simply because it's likely to be horribly unbalanced initially. But I'm certainly interested in what one could put together. Guettarda (talk) 16:22, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- If there were such title, it would implement some info about Palin. However I can't create any list right now since I do not know much supporter politicians in the first place. Yet it would be useful for the case. Kasaalan (talk) 16:31, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- I would recommend starting any such list in user space, simply because it's likely to be horribly unbalanced initially. But I'm certainly interested in what one could put together. Guettarda (talk) 16:22, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- I would see no problem with that. It'd be somewhat of a herculean effort to get a reasonable level of coverage though (see Creation and evolution in public education, Intelligent design in politics & Academic Freedom bills for some of the players). HrafnTalkStalk(P) 15:48, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
- That said, I think there's room for a daughter article that discusses "creationism is American politics" (and other countries, as warranted). Guettarda (talk) 15:14, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
Let's Vote on the Issue of the Bar Chart
Lets have a vote on this - Is this colored version of the bar chart
LET'S NOT! Wikinpedia is NOT A DEMOCRACY so does NOT OPERATE BY VOTING!HrafnTalkStalk(P) 14:42, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
And I would further point out that Hauskalainen's claim that "This has stood for a few days w/out objection" is FALSE! Hauskalainen in fact created this new title less than 24 hours ago]. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 15:47, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Let's DISCUSS the Bar Chart yet again
Orientation key: Pro-evolution Evolution and Creationism equally Pro-Creationism
more or less informative that this version
- ^ Science heroes and villains of 2008 New Scientist Magazine
- ^ a b Palin treads carefully between fundamentalist beliefs and public policy by Stephen Braun, September 28, 2008, Los Angeles Times
- ^ a b Sarah Palin, Wasilla, book banning Salon News Salon.com, Sept 15, 2008 article by David Talbot
- ^ a b "Evolution and Creationism In Public Education: An In-depth Reading Of Public Opinion" (PDF). (481 KB)
This is because Hrafn is claiming that I am acting without concensus on this issue. I had a quick look above and I see no concensus against this presentation. I'd like to test this with the following question.
- Should the colored version of the bar chart giving the orientations be reinstated to the article?
- Support It more fairly represents what the poll found--Hauskalainen (talk) 03:41, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
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- Comment: I've been following this discussion without comment until now. The grays, I will admit, are more staid and encyclopedic; however, if the colored version of the chart is straight out of a cited source(s), then the chart ought to reflect the colors used by the cited reference source(s).
- The original source has no graph, only numbers -- the graphical representation was added (after a request and considerable discussion) by myself some months ago. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 08:10, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- The colors are a bad idea because classifying "Creationism can be discussed in science class..." as "pro evolution" is laughable in 2009. The source is reliable in that there is reason to believe they arranged the survey and got the reported results in 2000. The source is not a reliable indication of whether discussing creationism in science class is pro evolution. Extraordinary claims require extraordinary proofs and the suggestion that discussing creationism in science class is pro evolution is surely extraordinary, and a misguided summary by a survey company should be ignored until a source with some scientific credibility makes the claim (DYG, Inc. is not an authority on creationism, evolution or science classes). Finally, even if the issue just outlined did not exist, the gray colors are better since they are more encyclopedic and convey the information more clearly to the reader (the three similar blues are confusing). Johnuniq (talk) 08:15, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- Against: The use of colors other than the original gray and silver. The editor who called for a vote appeared to be doing so in the face of other editors failing to assume good faith, possibly for good reason; however, such situations are rarely if ever one-sided. Since WP:NOTVOTE is a guideline and not a policy, sometimes it's okay to call for a vote. In this case I'd say it's okay to do so as a last resort before seeking other options per Wikipedia "policy". In any case, if true consensus can't be reached (which I find difficult to believe amongst mature editors who truly have article improvement at heart), then a vote is often a good step to take to involve other editors like myself who've just been "lurking" and not conversing.
- — .`^) Paine Ellsworthdiss`cuss (^`. 08:44, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- Why is it more difficult for a lurker to state 'I agree with X & Y on this' than to vote for/against? Also, I would point out that, at the time Hauskalainen called the vote, it was 4-2 against, with one of the two not expressing any strong feelings over it. This was certainly strong enough of a consensus for a decision for 'no change from status quo ante.' HrafnTalkStalk(P) 10:09, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- Frankly I'm hard-pressed to see the diff, Hrafn. Even you point out that before an "official" vote was called for, an "unofficial" vote of 4-2 already existed. So mentally, a tally had already been achieved resulting in a majority and a minority. Calling for an official vote appears to be editor Hauskalainen's next logical step after being unofficially beaten "at the polls". Now to me, "consensus" means "general agreement", so if one or more editors remain in disagreement then true consensus has not been reached. At this point it seems that there are now two logical choices to be made by the "minority":
- Create a consensus by agreeing with the majority, or
- Pursue outside arbitration per WP:DR.
- — .`^) Paine Ellsworthdiss`cuss (^`. 06:08, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Frankly I'm hard-pressed to see the diff, Hrafn. Even you point out that before an "official" vote was called for, an "unofficial" vote of 4-2 already existed. So mentally, a tally had already been achieved resulting in a majority and a minority. Calling for an official vote appears to be editor Hauskalainen's next logical step after being unofficially beaten "at the polls". Now to me, "consensus" means "general agreement", so if one or more editors remain in disagreement then true consensus has not been reached. At this point it seems that there are now two logical choices to be made by the "minority":
- Oppose coloured graph. (1) It's harder to read, since the three shades of blue are too close. There's also a loss of usability; most laser printers are still black and white. (2) I'm concerned about the characterisation of #3 as "evolution oriented". Guettarda (talk) 13:08, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- I am puzzled about why it is harder to read. Each bar is separated by white space!--Hauskalainen (talk) 15:40, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- The argument about printing one could apply to everywhere in Wikipedia and other charts in this article--Hauskalainen (talk) 15:40, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Please explain why you think that the third bar is not "evolution oriented". I find this hard to understand. --Hauskalainen (talk) 15:40, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- I am puzzled about why it is harder to read. Each bar is separated by white space! (a) How does that change the fact that the shades of blue are too similar? (b) As for "separated by white space"...what are you talking about? Guettarda (talk) 18:28, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- I really do not understand why you ´think that the shades are a problem. They are clearly visible and clearly linked to the key. I really am not bothered about the slight variation in shading and I am puzzed why you are.
- It's a problem because it would be easy for a reader with poor eyesight or a crappy monitor to think that all three bars were the same colour. The key does nothing to help differentiate between the three blue bars. It's also more difficult to visually compare the bars. And, most importantly, this isn't about you. Wikipedia is about making information available as widely as possible. Not just to people with excellent eyesight and good computer monitors, but also to people with poor eyesight and crappy monitors. So the fact that you aren't bothered is irrelevant. Guettarda (talk) 04:59, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
- I really do not understand why you ´think that the shades are a problem. They are clearly visible and clearly linked to the key. I really am not bothered about the slight variation in shading and I am puzzed why you are.
- I am puzzled about why it is harder to read. Each bar is separated by white space! (a) How does that change the fact that the shades of blue are too similar? (b) As for "separated by white space"...what are you talking about? Guettarda (talk) 18:28, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- The argument about printing one could apply to everywhere in Wikipedia True. Which is why, colour or greyscale, we should go for figures with more distinct colours. Three near-identical shades of blue aren't very useful.Guettarda (talk) 18:28, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- The point about the 3 hues is that they represent the orientation of the answers. Are you saying that the hues in the first 3 bars should be all different? How can that help? --Hauskalainen (talk) 23:17, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Well of course they need to be different. Different answers need to be distinct. When you use the same colour (or very close colours) for different answers, its at best confusing, at worse misleading. It makes it look like they are all the same answer. Which, of course, they aren't. Guettarda (talk) 04:59, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
- The point about the 3 hues is that they represent the orientation of the answers. Are you saying that the hues in the first 3 bars should be all different? How can that help? --Hauskalainen (talk) 23:17, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- The argument about printing one could apply to everywhere in Wikipedia True. Which is why, colour or greyscale, we should go for figures with more distinct colours. Three near-identical shades of blue aren't very useful.Guettarda (talk) 18:28, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Please explain why you think that the third bar is not "evolution oriented". I find this hard to understand. Well, "creationism can be discussed as a 'belief' in science class" could range from "this is what creationists believe, and here's why it's wrong". But that might also be the answer given by someone who believes in giving equal time to their "beliefs" alongside the science, or who thinks that evolution is "just another unproven belief, just like creationism". Guettarda (talk) 18:28, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Those advocating equal time or that they are both "faiths" would surely have answered the question represented by bar4 and not bar 3. Bar3 replies would mean that the teacher merely mentions that creationism is a belief system that is not open to experimentation and scientific investigation whereas science is based on observation, theory and constant validation by new observations and where possible experiment. To me this is the logical and only possible conclusion about those who chose that option. Now if you are arguing that the poll is badly worded that is another thing, but you would need to find a WP:RS for this to be included e´ven if just as a footnote.--Hauskalainen (talk) 23:17, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Oh, yes. "Surely" they would have done so. And you have a supporting source for your assertion? Yes, the authors of the study lumped the responses into those categories. But this is a report prepared by consultants, it isn't a peer-reviewed study. The data are reliable enough for us to use, bearing in mind that they are a decade old. The further you move away from the data, the more important interpretation becomes. Use the data, treat them as "fact". But why go further? It doesn't really help the reader in any real way. It's an unexplained categorisation of the consultants. Leave it out. It doesn't add much. Guettarda (talk) 04:59, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
- Putting it another way, the survey results are facts, but the classifications are opinions, and inexpert ones at that. We would need to apply WP:ASF if we included these opinions at all, and WP:WEIGHT would suggest that we should not give undue weight to them. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 05:21, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
- Oh, yes. "Surely" they would have done so. And you have a supporting source for your assertion? Yes, the authors of the study lumped the responses into those categories. But this is a report prepared by consultants, it isn't a peer-reviewed study. The data are reliable enough for us to use, bearing in mind that they are a decade old. The further you move away from the data, the more important interpretation becomes. Use the data, treat them as "fact". But why go further? It doesn't really help the reader in any real way. It's an unexplained categorisation of the consultants. Leave it out. It doesn't add much. Guettarda (talk) 04:59, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
- Those advocating equal time or that they are both "faiths" would surely have answered the question represented by bar4 and not bar 3. Bar3 replies would mean that the teacher merely mentions that creationism is a belief system that is not open to experimentation and scientific investigation whereas science is based on observation, theory and constant validation by new observations and where possible experiment. To me this is the logical and only possible conclusion about those who chose that option. Now if you are arguing that the poll is badly worded that is another thing, but you would need to find a WP:RS for this to be included e´ven if just as a footnote.--Hauskalainen (talk) 23:17, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Please explain why you think that the third bar is not "evolution oriented". I find this hard to understand. Well, "creationism can be discussed as a 'belief' in science class" could range from "this is what creationists believe, and here's why it's wrong". But that might also be the answer given by someone who believes in giving equal time to their "beliefs" alongside the science, or who thinks that evolution is "just another unproven belief, just like creationism". Guettarda (talk) 18:28, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Oppose coloured graph. Have only skimmed the discussion... but IMHO, adding colour does not add information, nor should it. Greyscale suits colour-blind males and B/W laser printers. rossnixon 02:55, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Editors previously stating an opinion:
- Against coloured: myself, Scientizzle, dave , Desoto10
- For coloured: Hauskalainen
- Coloured, but objecting to this version of the legend, and with reservations over neutrality/reliability: Stephan Schulz
- "go plaid"(humorous opinion, not apparently supporting either view): Slrubenstein
(I would thought that this was a consensus.) HrafnTalkStalk(P) 10:00, 27 July 2009 (UTC)Last updated for clarifications, etc HrafnTalkStalk(P) 15:34, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- The above is a comment by User:Hrafn. According to WP:TALK you should not refactor (i.e. edit) it except under narrow circumstances (none of which I think apply in this circumstances. Doing so will be regarded by User:Hrafn as grossly incivil and will lead them to view (even more) negatively any editor who does so. If you disagree with something that they've said then make a comment of your own. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 16:12, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- This is most certainly NOT a concensus. Slrubenstein's comment to me is meaningless. Scientizzle's only comment was that he was not a fan, but what he says in his comment is essentially a personal view which has no place driving what should and should not be allowed in the article. Desoto10 said "This is one of those unfortunate circumstances when the reference clearly says something that is wrong" which is again his personal opinion and has not place in the article. I happen to believe that the article is right in its judgement. As for Johnuniq's comment that "Creationism can be discussed in science class..." as "pro evolution" is laughable in 2009" would be laughable if the sentence ended there. However, he misses out the critical ending. "Creationism can be discussed in science class as a 'belief,' not a scientific theory". This is clearly a pro-evolution view because it is basically saying that "science is science" and "belief is belief". They are in different realms. --Hauskalainen (talk) 11:11, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you Hauskalainen for that pointless piece of WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT. Nobody (except perhaps Stephan Schulz) agrees with you, so none of their opinions count. You don't like the consensus, so pretend it doesn't exist. Looking back, I note that none of the points you have raised ('movement', 'religious belief', graphs) has received much (barely any in fact) support -- nor have your edits (which have been reverted by a number of editors). This suggests to me that you should perhaps be a bit less WP:BOLD in editing a topic in which you are clearly out of step with the majority of the regulars, and stop 'flogging a dead horse' when it is clear that you lack support. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 13:35, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- WP:Consensus means that we focus on the issues. So lets do that. --Hauskalainen (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- My issue is simply that the categorization of responses is in the original source and coloring the chart is one simple way of representing that in the chart.--Hauskalainen (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- Hafn's issue is one of "blobbishness". It is, in my opinion, complete baloney! The bars are separated by white lines for heavens sakes. The numbers are on the right even if the chart is no longer properly scaled. The colors or the shades of those colors cannot confuse. It would be better to keep them the same color and shade because they are represented in the key by that color and shade. It is pushing the intellectual ability of the reader to read and understand the chart to a ridiculous extent.--Hauskalainen (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- Scientizzle's view (and it was agreed with by dave souza) is that some people would regard "Creationism in science classes to be uncomfortably pro-Creation" is again pushing things because the chosed response which he presumable argues is pro-creation is that "Creationism can be discussed in science class as a 'belief,' not a scientific theory". If he can find a WP:RS indicating that a majority believe that, then the assertion in the source that this is a pro-evolution view his argument might have some merit. But I dount that there is any such evidence. Many naturual scientists presumably themselves believed in creation before the emergence of a credible alternative in natural selection. Such is the nature of science. I doubt that many science teachers would be so pro-evolution that they could not mention creationism as a belief for fear that it would be taking a pro-evoltionary postion as Scientizzle argues. --Hauskalainen (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- The source states that 29% of respondents agreed with "Creationism can be discussed in science class, but discussed as a 'belief', not a scientific theory (while Evolution should be taught as a 'scientific theory' in science class)" and that the source included this within the category "Support Evolution-oriented Positions". I think the PFAW probably made a poor choice in that categorization, but it's so vague as to encompass a hypothetical five minute aside on the first day of class or a week of lectures; the public and scientific response would undoubtedly be highly dependent upon the specific of any such event.
- Similarly, the source states that 13% agreed with "both Evolution and Creationism should be taught as 'scientific theories' in science class." This suffers from the same ambiguity as the previous example (i.e., one view receiving more time than another fits the response, but wouldn't necessarily be considered "Treating Evolution and Creationism Equally").
- The point of my argument is that to bind the six responses to the three categories PFAW used is unnecessary and force-feeds one interpretation of the results. — Scientizzle 21:39, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Paine Ellsworth has made reference to the article reflecting the source (which I argue it does, though there was specific reference to color which is not in the source). This editor voted against the change with the colors but failed to give a reason. I have given a reason for the change. It is only fair for me to expect to hear from him/her an argument against it. --Hauskalainen (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- dave souza made a point that the response "Creationism and evolution should be taught as 'scientific theories' in science class" would be a capitulation to the creationist position being pushed by the DI campaigns" is interesting and is no doubt true. But this was a possible position presented to those polled and only 13% of the people polled agreed with it. Whether you like it or not (and I would not) clearly 13% did want them to have equal treatment. All I want to are doing is representing what the public said and what is in the source. The only valid objection to its inclusion in the WP article would be if it breached a WP content rule. He claims that it is out of date because it predates "the rise and fall of ID". He gives no WP:RS for this but its easy enough to add the date of the survey to the chart to overcome this if it can be proven.--Hauskalainen (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- Desoto10's view that "Teaching evolution and creationism as scientific in schools is clearly and undeniably a pro-creationist viewpoint and yet, in the original article, the authors claim it to be Equal treatment. In a sense I agree with this but it rather depends on how you think of the argument. I do not think the authors intended to mean anything other than to summarise the argument that was put to respondents; that in science classes, evolution and creationism should be given equal treatment. In other words they are summarizing the question put and not trying to be interpretive to the status quo. We could color as per the source but make this ditinction clearer in the description of the category. What do you think? --Hauskalainen (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- The article is good the way it is and the colors do not help. The current article clearly conveys the information, and it allows the reader to decide what each statement means. That is all that we can do because the company that organized the 1999 survey is not a reliable source for interpreting the statements. It really is laughable to suggest that "Creationism can be discussed in science class as a 'belief,' not a scientific theory" is a "pro evolution" view. You would need a lot of evidence to justify such a claim. Johnuniq (talk) 00:06, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- I don't understand. Why is it laughable? --Hauskalainen (talk) 12:24, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- The article is good the way it is and the colors do not help. The current article clearly conveys the information, and it allows the reader to decide what each statement means. That is all that we can do because the company that organized the 1999 survey is not a reliable source for interpreting the statements. It really is laughable to suggest that "Creationism can be discussed in science class as a 'belief,' not a scientific theory" is a "pro evolution" view. You would need a lot of evidence to justify such a claim. Johnuniq (talk) 00:06, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Desoto10's view that "Teaching evolution and creationism as scientific in schools is clearly and undeniably a pro-creationist viewpoint and yet, in the original article, the authors claim it to be Equal treatment. In a sense I agree with this but it rather depends on how you think of the argument. I do not think the authors intended to mean anything other than to summarise the argument that was put to respondents; that in science classes, evolution and creationism should be given equal treatment. In other words they are summarizing the question put and not trying to be interpretive to the status quo. We could color as per the source but make this ditinction clearer in the description of the category. What do you think? --Hauskalainen (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- Editor Hauskalainen, my reason for deciding against the change you want to make is based in WP:PRESERVE. It is my opinion that you have not met the requirements of WP:BURDEN. It seems to me that this discussion has escalated beyond the realms of logic and WP:AGF. So you can either continue to escalate the argument, which will only result in more bad feelings, or you can create consensus by agreeing with the other involved editors. If neither of these choices are attractive to you, then I suggest you seek dispute resolution.
- — .`^) Paine Ellsworthdiss`cuss (^`. 06:30, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- I want to understand everyone's objections before going to WP:DR. Once we get the objecttions clear then we can summarise them for the arbitrators. Hence I need to understand your argument that WP:BURDEN has not been met. I have clearly shown that the orientation of the responses was reported in the colors exactly as it is put in the article. Why is that not enough for you?--Hauskalainen (talk) 12:40, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Forgive me, Hauskalainen, please. I just returned from another project and reread my words above. The "you" is misleading as heck! It was meant generally, yet I see now that it points directly at you, which I had not intended. What I meant was that the original chart ought to be preserved until and unless a final resolution is found, and that I'm not convinced that even the original chart, or any chart at all, ought to be in the article. The "burden" has not been meant in terms of neutrality and clarity for readers. And for me, the proof of this is right here in these discussions. If we as editors treat this issue as so controversial that civility begins to go out the window, then just imagine how the general readers of this article must feel. I say ditch the chart altogether until a more neutral one can be found and reliably sourced.
- — .`^) Paine Ellsworthdiss`cuss (^`. 04:20, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- I want to understand everyone's objections before going to WP:DR. Once we get the objecttions clear then we can summarise them for the arbitrators. Hence I need to understand your argument that WP:BURDEN has not been met. I have clearly shown that the orientation of the responses was reported in the colors exactly as it is put in the article. Why is that not enough for you?--Hauskalainen (talk) 12:40, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Yet more WP:IDIDNTHEARTHAT from Hauskalainen. WP:CONSENSUS ≠ argumentum ad nauseam/'last man standing'. There is already a clear consensus against this change.
On a minor point, the issues I have raised with the colour-scheme go well beyond "blobbishness". HrafnTalkStalk(P) 03:47, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- A minor point? "blobbishness" WAS your primary objection! What are your other issues? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Hauskalainen (talk • contribs)
- It was a "minor point" that I was making that you had severely truncated my position. Points of mine that you failed to mention were:
- 'Equal treatment'=Creationist, so should not have a similar colour to 'Evolution' - for which I cited a cast iron source, and spent more time on than 'blobbishness'
- 'Creatinoism in science class as belief' probably not acceptable to the scientific community.
- Polling company probably not a RS for what positions are creationist (and what positions are acceptable to scientific community).
- HrafnTalkStalk(P) 14:31, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- All these points are personal POV and have no place in directing what should and should not be in the WP article. Please try to stick to editorial policy.--Hauskalainen (talk) 23:17, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- It was a "minor point" that I was making that you had severely truncated my position. Points of mine that you failed to mention were:
- Just to make my position clear, so you don't need to speculate: I think the second version of the coloured graph is a good and fair representation of the source. I dislike that it needs a legend, and I think the legend is problematic. I my doubts about the neutrality (not the reliability) of the original source - to me, it seems like they try to stress support for evolution by grouping the results as they do. This poll is quite different from others presenting evolution/creation as a dichotomy (i.e. "what do you believe", not "what should be taught how"). I think then first version, that Hauskalainen supports, has an inferior colour scheme and a much more problematic legend. --Stephan Schulz (talk) 13:00, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- I actually copied in your version to the discussion. I'm happy with that. As for the legend, I think it could be expanded to make it clearer that this was the pollster's view of the responses regarding the teaching of origins in science classes. IMHO it would be meaningless to color the bars and not explain what they mean. I happen to think the grouping of the three blueish bars as pro-evolution should be non controversial. If you think there is another interpretation I'd be happy to hear it.--Hauskalainen (talk) 15:33, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- I see no need for the legend. Let the six individual responses speak for themselves rather than use the categorization scheme of one source published by an advocacy group, not a scientific organization. I don't care about colors (though, without a legend, they shouldn't be grouped together to avoid confusion)...gray is fine. Plaid would be fine, too. — Scientizzle 21:39, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- I actually copied in your version to the discussion. I'm happy with that. As for the legend, I think it could be expanded to make it clearer that this was the pollster's view of the responses regarding the teaching of origins in science classes. IMHO it would be meaningless to color the bars and not explain what they mean. I happen to think the grouping of the three blueish bars as pro-evolution should be non controversial. If you think there is another interpretation I'd be happy to hear it.--Hauskalainen (talk) 15:33, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- Just to make my position clear, so you don't need to speculate: I think the second version of the coloured graph is a good and fair representation of the source. I dislike that it needs a legend, and I think the legend is problematic. I my doubts about the neutrality (not the reliability) of the original source - to me, it seems like they try to stress support for evolution by grouping the results as they do. This poll is quite different from others presenting evolution/creation as a dichotomy (i.e. "what do you believe", not "what should be taught how"). I think then first version, that Hauskalainen supports, has an inferior colour scheme and a much more problematic legend. --Stephan Schulz (talk) 13:00, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Acceptability of 'Creationism in science class as belief' to the scientific community
As I pointed out above, it may not be "non controversial" that 'Creationism in science class as belief' is "pro-evolution". When prominent scientist and Royal Society officer Michael Reiss expressed a similar opinion, it led to a considerable outcry in the scientific community and his resignation. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 15:57, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Americans believe...
The section about Creationism's following is heavily American-centric. Frankly I don't give a damn what breakdown of Americans opine about the teaching of evolution, and given that Americans make up only 5% of the world's population I doubt that many others do either. Please, cut it back, less Americana. PiCo (talk) 22:50, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
- That's hardly surprising. Creationism-as-a-movement and the evo-creo controversy is mainly, and most prominently, a US phenomenon. This means that there're more (and more detailed) polls and more (and more prominent) RSs about Creationism-in-the-US than about it elsewhere. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 05:00, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
- It is hardly surprising that an article on a topic that is important largely because of events in the US has a good deal of information about the US. What is wrong with this? Wouldn't you expect the article on olive oil to have a great deal of information about Spain, Italy, and Greece? Should I go there and say "I doubt many people care about Spain, please, less pain-centered articles?" Besides, this is English Wikipedia - of course many readers will be interested in US-centered topics. If you are not interested, well, PiCo, why then did you type "creationism" in the search box and go to this article? If you are more intersted in other topics, why not go read articles on them? If there is a topic that you feel is important that is not yet represented by an article in Wikipedia ... hmmm ... what to do, what to do ... a dilemma ... Hey! I have an idea! Wikipedia is the encyclopedia "anyone can edit at any time!" PiCo, why not just write more articles on topics you find interesting? I find this article interesting. I find articles about events in the US interesting. I will write them, and I will read them. As long as they are not deleted, I and othes will continue to read them. If you don't like it, too bad. We don't care. Slrubenstein | Talk 07:02, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- PiCo did not say he was 'not interested' in Creationism, rather American opinion on the teaching of evolution. Also, Creationism is potentially of equal interest to everyone on the planet. Olives are not grown all over the planet. Your subsequent supercilious TLDR really doesn't show much good faith, Slrubenstein; does it? Mannafredo (talk) 08:38, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- The term creationism has been co-opted to refer to specific American religious and political views, and the article must deal with that. There's less attention antievolution and young Earthism in other countries, but use of the term to refer to all kinds of belief in creation has been pushed to the side by knowledge of the American issues. The minority holding these views are liable to be seen as imported American sects, but they do exist and are known about. However they inevitably get less coverage, and our article reflects that. More well sourced information will be welcome, particularly with areas such as Turkey, but that's not so easy to obtain.
- Having written that, it just struck me that the problem with the section PiCo mentions is that it had "America First, outside the US second". So, have boldly reorganised it to put Worldwide first, with the US then following as a part of the worldwide scene.[1] Same text, one heading changed. Hope that helps. . dave souza, talk 09:18, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- People can't necessarily be expected to have prior knowledge of any co-meaning that Creationism (or any other word) may have, and as there's no mention of it in the early paragraphs, it is not surprising that visitors to this article are somewhat surprised at the seemingly excessive American slant. If there is such strong consensus of this co-meaning, surely that should be noted in the first or second line of the article. However, my edit is much more to do with Slrubenstein's disdainful and bullying reply. Regards, Mannafredo (talk) 12:32, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Gosh, if what I wrote was disdainful and bullying, I wonder how harshly you would judge PiCo's blather that "Frankly I don't give a damn what breakdown of Americans opine about the teaching of evolution, and given that Americans make up only 5% of the world's population I doubt that many others do either. Please, cut it back, less Americana." I'll try not to be disdainful: Creationism is very strong in the United States and it is reasonable to discuss the role of Americans in promoting creationism, as well as the influence of Creationism on Americans. Wikipedians who care about writing an accurate encyclopedia should have no problem with this. By what standard is the article "excessively" American? If someone has verifiable and reliable sources about other countries where Creationism has been as influential, or other countries that have generated as much "Creationist research," why don't they just add that information to the article, rather than criticize it? And if they have no such sources, then why criticize the article? I hope I have been successful in eliminating any bullying or disdainful tone from this comment. Slrubenstein | Talk 13:14, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- No, his words did not irritate me as your's did. I said 'seemingly' excessively American, as in, perhaps, to someone unfamiliar with the subject - which may be why they looked it up in the first place. People come here to read and learn, not just edit and argue. Mannafredo (talk) 13:54, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- Third and fourth sentences of the lead section, first paragraph. Any suggestions for clarification? . . dave souza, talk 12:54, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- They don't mention America or Hrafn's 'Creationism-as-a-movement'. It's not until the Re-emergence of creationist thought in the United States section that this seems to really take off. The Christian science article begins 'Creation science or scientific creationism is the movement within creationism...' This seems to me a much more fitting article to have a big American slant, or at least gives an example of how early on in an article such different wordings/meanings should be highlighted. But hey, I really don't care that much. Really. Mannafredo (talk) 13:54, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- Third and fourth sentences of the lead section, first paragraph. Any suggestions for clarification? . . dave souza, talk 12:54, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
A question: how often is the word "creationism" used in a non-Antievolutionism sense these days? My impression is that the 'co-option' has been more or less total. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 13:07, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not really aware of any other use of the term - not even in the past. It always was defined more or less as opposition to naturalistic evolution. Creationists sometimes try to give the impression of a more general definition, positive definition (as in "Newton was a creationist"). --Stephan Schulz (talk) 13:29, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- I do not think Christian Science is a particularly important part of the creationist movement. Slrubenstein | Talk 14:06, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- I think the real problem with the introduction - and the article - has nothing to do with America, but rather with an assumption many people have about creationism: that any belief that a supernatural being created the universe is "creationism." I have two major problems with this. First, once you add the "ism" you are equating creationism with other more or less ideologically coherent movements. But ancient Israelites, ancient Babylonians, Ancient Egyptians, and ancient Greeks were not all part of some movement. Second, you are equating the beliefs of those ancient Peoples with present-day creationists. But present-day creationists explicitly posit divine creation as an alternative to naturalist theories/accounts. Even though present-day creationists are guided by theological beliefs, they are applying these beliefs to the natural world. I am not so sure that ancient Israelites etc. believed in a "natural world" the way we do. from what I have read, by historians of religion, ancients (including ancient Israelites) viewed everything theologically. We cannot really know what the authors of Genesis 1 or 2 really believed, which is linked to how they thought in general, but I think it is a safe bet that however they thought, three or more thousand years ago, it was different from how present day creationists think. Maybe they viewed what they were writing as allegory or metaphor. Who knows. But they were not writing it as part of a debate with naturalists, they were writing it as part of a debate with other ancient religions (at least, accouring to Kaufman). My point: when we talk about "isms" like fascism, communism, etc., we need to be culturally and historically specific. Many parts of this article are. i think all of the article needs to be cleaned up to be historically specific. I think it is a mistake for example, to identify indigenous people as "creatonist" until Europeans came and taught them about geology, astronomy, and biology. True, they may not have believed in the theory of evolution. But that is because they had no exposure to the theory of evolution. Well, they also had no exposure to creationism. So it is a mistake to call them creationists. Creationism is a movement guided by a more or less coherent ideology that developed at a certain place and time, and that is what this article should be about. Slrubenstein | Talk 14:20, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Movements?
The article describes several creationist "movements" and lumped under this are various types of creationist belief. I think that these are not "movements" but examples of creationist beliefs. Therefore lumping all this together as movements is IMHO quite wrong.
Now I believe that there are clearly some "movements" in relation to this topic but these should be dealth with separately. These range from the people active in trying to persuade people that men and dinosaurs co-existed to those adopting the more subtle "creation science" technique which seeks to convice people that other scientific theories about the origin of the universe are wrong or that take the position that postulating "a creator" is just about as valid a piece of scientific theorising as was postulations about the atom hundreds of years before more concrete evidence for the atom was found. I would argue therefore that we should not label "belief systems" as "movements", and we should create a new sub section summarising the attempts made in recent years by activist groups in trying to counter scientific based naturalistic explanations.
What do other editors think?--Hauskalainen (talk) 18:49, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
- I would certainly assert that there exists an intelligent design movement, centred around the Discovery Institute (and subsidiary organisations) and a Young Earth Creationism/Creation Science movement (centred around Answers in Genesis, the Institute for Creation Research, the Creation Research Society, and a host of lesser institutions and organisations). Historically there has been a (generally OEC) creationist movement since the early 20th century (with organisations including the Anti-Evolution League of America and the Evolution Protest Movement). A belief system becomes a "movement" when it forms organisational structures to promote its beliefs -- both to the general public and/or in the political sphere. Various strands of creationism have done this, so it is entirely appropriate to identify them as "movements"(particularly when at least some of them have explicitly self-identified as such). HrafnTalkStalk(P) 05:55, 4 July 2009 (UTC)
- Or are these movements better described merely as a form of evangelism attached to a particular belief system? I guess what I am asking is "should these activist movements be listed under the appropriate forms of creationist belief or be listed separately?". I think it is wrong to list for example African forms of creation by deities as being "movements" if there is no active form of evangelism associated with these cultural belief systems. --Hauskalainen (talk) 07:09, 4 July 2009 (UTC)
- No. These movements have as their purpose Christian apologetics defending, as well as evangelism promoting, these beliefs. And their focus is an individual belief (some form of creationism) that forms a part of a number of differing "belief systems" (e.g. YEC in Seventh Day Adventistism, much of conservative Evangelicalism and some/many?/most? Traditionalist Catholics, ID in other conservative Evangelicals, and some conservative Catholics). 'Creationism' is generally only taken to mean belief in a creation theology when that belief is sufficiently narrow and/or rigid as to deny science that threatens/contradicts some of those beliefs. That is not true of "African forms of creation by deities" (or any other non-Abrahamic religions except for Hindu creationism) AFAIK, so they are not relevant. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 09:43, 4 July 2009 (UTC)
the major issue i have with this article is maybe the theological misuse of the word 'literal'- it is ambivalent and not strictly defined. Personally,I would argue that the only literal position is Old earth creationism ( which is historically the church's position, even amongst the early fundamentalist movement).That is my position. I would seperate young earth creationism by describing it as a methodology of expounding scripture which has no respect for revelation as the foundation of theology and has no desire to let God speak through his word but rather misuses and misinterprets biblical text to make a political and social point- but I wouldn't write it in an encyclopedia! Articles like this should serve as portals and give as little POV as possible- by using 'literal' one makes a qualified judgment which is opinion and not fact. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 212.183.134.210 (talk) 00:40, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Hinduism and creationism edit
I spent 3 hours sourcing this paragraph, adding 2 new references and multiple wikipedia links as below, which was undone. Please be considerate before randomly undoing it, especially if you are not a hindu. I welcome comments from all religions. Thampran (talk) 05:45, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
My edit in the subsection below, which I feel has significantly improved on the stub before.
Hinduism and creationism
A variety of theories exist regarding the universe, but in general the Hindu view of the cosmos is both eternal and cyclic. An account is recorded in the scriptures according to which the universe, the Earth, along with humans and other creatures undergo repeated cycles of creation and destruction (pralaya) depending on whether it is the day or night for the creator god Brahma of the Hindu Trinity. Put simply, creation occurs when Brahma is awake as his lila (amusement) and the universe is destroyed when he sleeps. The time scales of the Hindu creation cycle correspond roughly to the modern cosmology. According to Carl Sagan, "A day of Brahma is 8.64 billion years long, longer than the age of the Earth or the Sun and about half the time since the Big Bang".[1]
In general, many Hindus also believe in evolution due to the serial progression of avatars, which are similar to the scientific concept of evolution.[2] When Brahma is awake, in addition to all life, the god also creates "avatars" which are (manifestations) of the second god in the trinity, Vishnu. There are several stages and avatars of several gods, (25 in some texts, but the 10 attributed to Vishnu, called Dasavatara of Vishnu), are important in maintaining life. Among the ten major avatars, nine have already appeared and the final one will appear in the future (at the end of the Brahma's day when all time ends). The 8.4 billion years is divided into four epochs or yugas, named in reverse order (4 or Sathya, 3 or treta , 2 or dwapara and 1 or Kali) of progression in time. The avatars of Vishnu start with the non human: the first is a fish (Matsya), then a tortoise (Kurma), then a boar (Varaha) and finally a half-man/half-lion (Narasimha); all of which appeared in the Satya Yuga (or the "pure age or true age"). The first humanoid, a dwarf man (Vamana), then appears, followed by an axe bearing man (Parashurama), and then appears a fully human avatar (Ramachandra), all described in the Treta Yuga (third epoch). More human avatars appear in the next, Dwapara Yuga (or second epoch), with Krishna (meaning 'dark colored' or 'very attractive') avatar, along with his brother Balarama (or Buddha in other texts). When Krishna disappeared from the earth, the final epoch or Kali Yuga (the "foul" age or the "age of Anger") started. We are now living in the Kali Yuga. The only avatar expected in this epoch is the final avatar Kalki (in some texts Shiva), also called "the destroyer of foulness", or "Eternity", or simply "time"). This is the final of the god trinity, who will bring with him the end of the life and time cycles and all life will be released from Brahma's lila or maya (translates to play or farce or unreality) to rejoin the cosmic consciousness or Brahman to attain (moksha). Then Brahma will sleep until his next day comes, when he wakes up the life cycles and time cycles begin once again.
Some Hindu religious and political organizations have been promoting creationism-evolution study.[3]
"Good reason" for removing: it's UNSOURCED
The above, striking unsourced material:
A variety of theories exist regarding the universe, but in general the Hindu view of the cosmos is both eternal and cyclic. An account is recorded in the scriptures according to which the universe, the Earth, along with humans and other creatures undergo repeated cycles of creation and destruction (pralaya) depending on whether it is the day or night for the creator god Brahma of the Hindu Trinity. Put simply, creation occurs when Brahma is awake as his lila (amusement) and the universe is destroyed when he sleeps. The time scales of the Hindu creation cycle correspond roughly to the modern cosmology.According to Carl Sagan, "A day of Brahma is 8.64 billion years long, longer than the age of the Earth or the Sun and about half the time since the Big Bang".[4]In general, many Hindus also believe in evolution due to the serial progression of avatars, which are similar to the scientific concept of evolution.[5]
When Brahma is awake, in addition to all life, the god also creates "avatars" which are (manifestations) of the second god in the trinity, Vishnu. There are several stages and avatars of several gods, (25 in some texts, but the 10 attributed to Vishnu, called Dasavatara of Vishnu), are important in maintaining life. Among the ten major avatars, nine have already appeared and the final one will appear in the future (at the end of the Brahma's day when all time ends). The 8.4 billion years is divided into four epochs or yugas, named in reverse order (4 or Sathya, 3 or treta , 2 or dwapara and 1 or Kali) of progression in time. The avatars of Vishnu start with the non human: the first is a fish (Matsya), then a tortoise (Kurma), then a boar (Varaha) and finally a half-man/half-lion (Narasimha); all of which appeared in the Satya Yuga (or the "pure age or true age"). The first humanoid, a dwarf man (Vamana), then appears, followed by an axe bearing man (Parashurama), and then appears a fully human avatar (Ramachandra), all described in the Treta Yuga (third epoch). More human avatars appear in the next, Dwapara Yuga (or second epoch), with Krishna (meaning 'dark colored' or 'very attractive') avatar, along with his brother Balarama (or Buddha in other texts). When Krishna disappeared from the earth, the final epoch or Kali Yuga (the "foul" age or the "age of Anger") started. We are now living in the Kali Yuga. The only avatar expected in this epoch is the final avatar Kalki (in some texts Shiva), also called "the destroyer of foulness", or "Eternity", or simply "time"). This is the final of the god trinity, who will bring with him the end of the life and time cycles and all life will be released from Brahma's lila or maya (translates to play or farce or unreality) to rejoin the cosmic consciousness or Brahman to attain (moksha). Then Brahma will sleep until his next day comes, when he wakes up the life cycles and time cycles begin once again.Some Hindu religious and political organizations have been promoting creationism-evolution study.[6]
HrafnTalkStalk(P) 06:08, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- Be it also noted that Hinduwebsite.com doesn't use the word avatar and that Thampran's interpretation of the website seems to be OR.83.248.186.17 (talk) 07:38, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
WP:CANVAS
I would like to note that User:Thampran is WP:CANVASing for reverts to his favoured version on:
HrafnTalkStalk(P) 07:01, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Possible Sources for Hindu time estimation and creation myths (Please discuss if valid)
http://www.geocities.com/profvk/gohitvip/41.html
http://vinaymangal.googlepages.com/VedicTimeTravel.pdf
http://www.sacred-texts.com/hin/vp/vp037.htm
I am too sleepy :) Can seem to find only western interpretations. No direct hindu articles Thampran (talk) 08:18, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- The subject of this article is Creationism, not "Hindu time estimation" or Hindu creation myths -- so those issues are largely off-topic here.
- Geocities is not a WP:RS, and in any case, that link is broken.
- The Vishnu Purana is a WP:PRIMARY source, so requires a secondary source for interpretation.
- vinaymangal.googlepages.com appears to be WP:SELFPUB, so cannot be used on an article on anything other than Vinay Mangal.
HrafnTalkStalk(P) 08:28, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
I am finding that the www.hinduwebsite.com is run by an single individual (possibly a hindu influenced by christian theology by the opinions expressed). http://www.hinduwebsite.com/onegod.asp almost advocates for one god! Mostly opinion on the site and not that useful to me. Thampran (talk) 08:36, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- Then either (i) place a {{verify credibility}} or {{Self-published inline}} tag next to it, or (ii) if you feel strongly about it, then remove the material cited to it. I would however point out that this would leave the section with so little (and so unconnected) sourced information, that it is likely to be eliminated altogether. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 09:56, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- I agree with Hrafa. Is there a real "creationist movement" in Indian right now? Is evolution not taught in schools? Slrubenstein | Talk 11:45, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- Hindu creationism appears to be solely an International Society for Krishna Consciousness thing. Whether that counts as "real" or not, I'd prefer not to speculate. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 12:11, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Update?
So what happened to the stuff above? The stuff sought to be inserted by User:Thampran was substantially correct, so if it is considered relevant, then it is worth finding sources. Given that "Creationism is the religious belief that [...] were created in some form by [...] deity", and given that creationism doesn't seem to mean "rejection of evolution", I don't see why "Hindu creation myths" would not be relevant to this article. Shreevatsa (talk) 12:54, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
- What happened is that it was rejected, as badly sourced and/or off-topic. Creation myths belong in creation myths, not here. The creationist movement started off calling itself the 'anti-evolution' movement, so yes it does mean "rejection of evolution". HrafnTalkStalk(P) 13:32, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
- I would further point out that this article does not contain the creation myths of any other religion -- including ones that have far greater connection to the term 'creationism' (for more detail, read the book The Creationists) than Hinduism does. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 13:52, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
- Ok then, thanks for the clarification. As I said, "badly sourced" is possible to fix, but if it is off-topic then it is not worth doing so. It is unfortunate that the generic-sounding word "creationism" is used to mean something so specific, but American usage does seem to have a tendency to coin vague, poorly descriptive phrases like "pro-life" and "pro-choice". :-) Shreevatsa (talk) 15:04, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
New resource - NCSE makes available online the Creation/Evolution Journal
NCSE makes available on-line the Creation/Evolution Journal running from 1980 to 1996. I guess a good resource for all Creationism/ID/Evolution articles--LexCorp (talk) 00:36, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
- and the Reports of the National Center for Science Education running from 1997 to 2009.--LexCorp (talk) 21:05, 20 August 2009 (UTC)
Definition of "creationism" (again)
I've fact-tagged the statement "In a broad sense, it covers a wide range of interpretations of beliefs that a supernatural force such as a deity intervenes, or has intervened, directly in the natural world." -- for two reasons:
- As far as I know, we don't have a WP:RS for this definition.
- Its undue breadth is being used as an excuse to introduce creation myths into the article.
The problem is that most of the scholarly material written about creationism is written in an American (or Anglo-American) context. This means that what explicit (Creationism's Trojan Horse p283, Evolution vs. creationism ppxxi-xxiii) and implicit (The Creationists, Tower of Babel) descriptions of it are in that context. This means that although Creationism may exist outside this context, a WP:RS definition does not. While this creates problems for us, I do think that it means that, at the very least, we should not state a 'general' definition of "creationism" that conflicts with them. Both an allegorical interpretations of Genesis and theistic evolution exist in the American context, but are not taken to be "creationism" by scholars of the subject in that context. Therefore it would be inappropriate to have a definition of "creationism" that would appear to be inclusive of such scholar-excluded things (as it appears "In a broad sense, it covers a wide range of interpretations of beliefs that a supernatural force such as a deity intervenes, or has intervened, directly in the natural world" does). HrafnTalkStalk(P) 14:30, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
- I concur Hrafn, this has been an ongoing source of misunderstanding. Creation myths is an article that deals with details of creation mythology from religions all over the world, and throughout history. Anything related to Hindu creation myths (or others) properly belongs there. This article, Creationism, is specifically about the contemporary Christian (and primarily American) response to science and evolutionary theory, and it is a political movement as much as it is a religous belief. Perhaps the hat note at the top of the article could be used to clarify this? Doc Tropics 14:42, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
- I wouldn't go that far -- Judaic & Islamic creationism is very real, and there is at least vestigial evidence that Hindu creationism exists. The problem is that there has been no in-depth scholarship outside Christianity, so little to base a definition on beyond analogy/extrapolation from the American/Christian definition, and occasional comments such as this (which I think distinguishes Creationism from creation myths generally rather well):
Creationism is about maintaining particular, narrow forms of religious belief -- beliefs that seem to their adherents to be threatened by the very idea of evolution.
— Eugenie Scott (2004), Evolution vs. creationism: an introduction, p xii
Many — if not most — Americans think of the creation and evolution controversy as a dichotomy with "creationists" on one side, and "evolutionists" on the other. This assumption all too often leads to the unfortunate conclusion that because creationists are believers in God, that evolutionists must be atheists. The true situation is much more complicated: creationism comes in many forms, and not all of them reject evolution.
It is highly desirable to move people away from this inaccurate dichotomy. A simple classroom exercise, the Creationism/Evolution Continuum, has been used successfully by middle and high school teachers as well as university professors to illustrate the many intermediate positions between the extremes. ....— Eugenie Scott (December 7th, 2000), The Creation/Evolution Continuum
- As I recall, that was the original reason for casting creationism as a spectrum including theistic evolution. If we accept that the more recent definition excludes positions compatible with science on evolution and Earth history, then we still need to make it explicit that the term has been contested, and many believers in creation dispute the validity of belief in antievolution. The historical aspect also gets messy: creationists have a habit of claiming as predecessors scientists who did not hold the modern dogmatic rejection of science on biblical grounds. Care would be needed to recast the article, and it's questionable if it would stop editors from wanting other creation myths to be included. However, it could be possible to make a statement in the lead that this article covers only the wide range of beliefs in the antievolution movement, limiting it to the narrower definition while acknowledging that the term has been contested by other denominations and religions covered by the creation myth article. . dave souza, talk 18:00, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
- The problem is that the topic of this article is 'Creationism' not the 'Creationism/Evolution Continuum', and as such only contains the Creationism side of the continuum. The issue isn't who the creationists claim for their side, but what viewpoints self-label, or are labeled by experts, as 'Creationist'. Do all that "many believers in creation dispute the validity of" describing "belief in antievolution" as "creationism"? HrafnTalkStalk(P) 18:38, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
Sources
When the Origin of Species went on sale late in 1859, the term "creationist" commonly designated a person who believed in the special origination of a soul for each human fetus, as opposed to a traducianist, who believed that the souls of children were inherited from their parents. Although Darwin (in private) and his allies occasionally referred to their opponents as "creationists," for about seventy-five years after the publication of his book such adversaries were more typically called "advocates of creation" or, increasingly, "anti-evolutionists." This custom prevailed well into the twentieth century, in large part because antievolutionists remained united far more by their hostility to evolution than by any common commitment to a particular view of creation.
As late as the 1920s antievolutionists chose to dedicate their organizations to "Christian Fundamentals," "Anti-Evolution," and "Anti-False Science," not to creationism. It was not until 1929 that one of George McCready Price’s former students, the Seventh-day Adventist biologist Harold W. Clark, explicitly packaged Price’s new catastrophism as "creationism." In a brief self-published book titled Back to Creationism Clark urged readers to quit simply opposing evolution and to adopt the new "science of creationism," by which he meant Price’s flood geology. For decades to come various Christian groups, from flood geologists to theistic evolutionists, squabbled over which camp most deserved to use the creationist label. However, by the 1980s the flood geologists/scientific creationists had clearly co-opted the term for their distinctive interpretation of earth history.[4]
- The "Pillars of Creationism" are the view that "Evolution is a 'Theory in Crisis'", "Evolution and Religion are Incompatible" and that "Balancing' Evolution" (with Creationism) is desirable.(Evolution vs. creationism pp xxi-xxiii)
CURRENT COMMONALITIES
An analysis of American creationism of all varieties reveals a number of shared characteristics: (1) belief in the creation of the universe by a supernatural designer and (usually) the designer's continuing intervention in the creation; (2) implacable anti-evolutionism, stemming from opposition to the scientific consensus on the evolution of the universe and life, such opposition being based on theological, moral, ideological, and political, but never scientific grounds; (3) criticism of all or most methodologies underpinning current scientific evidence for the evolution of life, without presenting for peer review any competing theory of origins; and (4)the most fundamental aspect of creationism: the explicit or implicit grounding of anti-evolutionism in religious scripture. And, of course there is the indefatigable political effort to influence and ultimately rewrite school science curricula.
— Creationism's Trojan Horse, p283
A system or theory of creation: spec. a. The theory that God immediately creates a soul for every human being born (opposed to traducianism); b. The theory which attributes the origin of matter, the different species of animals and plants, etc., to ‘special creation’ (opposed to evolutionism).
HrafnTalkStalk(P) 15:30, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
- I think the "broad" definition of creationism - i.e. "In a broad sense, it covers a wide range of interpretations of beliefs that a supernatural force such as a deity intervenes, or has intervened, directly in the natural world" - is misleading, and should be deleted until someone can find a convincing source that backs it. While it is obviously likely that a creationist may believe that a divine being intervenes in the world more generally, "creationism" refers to creation. Any broader use of the term "creationism" is probably just bad English, I'm afraid. Westmorlandia (talk) 10:45, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
Suggested replacement
How's this as an alternate to the current rather woolly lead paragraph:
Creationism is the religious belief,<ref>Scott & Eldredge 2005, p. 114</ref> that attributes the origin of the universe and life, to supernatural 'special creation'.<ref>'Creationism', [[Oxford English Dictionary]], Second Edition, 1989</ref> It is closely associated with a religiously-motivated rejection of the theory of evolution.<ref name=num/><ref>Scott & Eldredge 2005, ppxxi-xxiii, summarised at [http://ncseweb.org/taking-action/pillars-creationism The Pillars of Creationism]</ref><ref>''[[Creationism's Trojan Horse]]'', p283</ref>
Without the ref-tags being nowiki'd:
Creationism is the religious belief,[7] that attributes the origin of the universe and life, to supernatural 'special creation'.[8] It is closely associated with a religiously-motivated rejection of the theory of evolution.[9][10][11]
Note that the definition does not state "a single act of supernatural 'special creation'" -- so allows for the possibility of progressive creationism and/or multiple tinkering by an intelligent designer. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 12:49, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
- Looks reasonable, it appears that special creation needs improvement. Theory of evolution is a redirect to evolution, suggest scientific theory of evolution.
- Since pro-evolution use of the term has been removed, the 2nd paragraph sentence "Whilst some have tried to refute these theories, others believe in types of creationism that do not exclude all of these theories" looks a bit odd. Suggest changing it to "Whilst some religious views are opposed to these theories, other religious beliefs in divine creation are compatible with or do not exclude all of these theories. The latter previously held that their beliefs were rightly called creationism, but by the 1980s the term had been co-opted by flood geologists and anti-evolution creationists."
- That could be cited to Ron Numbers as quoted above. . . dave souza, talk 13:16, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
- It's rather murky even as is. "These theories" (P2S2) appears to refer to the "naturalistic explanations for the universe and for life" (P2S1) rather than the "natural biological processes, in particular evolution, as an explanation accounting for the history, diversity, and complexity of life on earth" (P1S2, which is the sentences before, and only refers, indirectly, to a single 'theory', evolution). I don't think, by any stretch, that it can be considered to have been referring to the recently-deleted sentence: "a wide range of interpretations of beliefs" (which I think is what you mean by "pro-evolution use of the term has been removed"). I would suggest simply replacing "these theories" with "these explanations" to clarify. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 17:23, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
- Good point, "these explanations" works better. The recently-deleted sentence: "a wide range of interpretations of beliefs" was indeed what I was referring to: without saying that my proposal is in any way ideal, I think the second paragraph should cover the point that historically, theists could consider themselves creationists while accepting evolutionary and geological science. Once that's stated, we can then follow modern usage and have anti-evolution creationists of various views, divided from pro-science people including theists who accept evolution. Here are the first three sentences of the second paragraph at present:
In many countries, belief in creationism has decreased as scientific theories have been presented that support more naturalistic explanations for the universe and for life. Whilst some have tried to refute these theories, others believe in types of creationism that do not exclude all of these theories. When mainstream scientific research produces conclusions which contradict a strict creationist interpretation of scripture, some will reject the conclusions of the research and/or its underlying scientific theories and/or its methodology
- Rethinking that to avoid the implication that science has caused a decline in belief,
Many mainstream denominations and religious believers in divine creation have come to terms with scientific theories that present naturalistic explanations of the formation of the universe and of life, a range of beliefs which have been termed theistic evolution. While believers in theistic evolution have in the past used the label creationism for their views, by the 1980s the term had been co-opted by flood geologists and anti-evolution creationists. When mainstream scientific research has produced work which contradicts a literal interpretation of scripture, creationists have rejected the conclusions of the research and/or its underlying scientific theories and/or its methodology.
- The remainder of the paragraph would follow on from that. . . dave souza, talk 18:17, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
- How hard were the pro-evolution theists trying to claim the word 'Creationism' for themselves? My impression was that the anti-evolutionists were only using the word sporadically before the resurgence in the 1960s, so any concerted effort by the pro-evolution forces would have foreclosed the issue. Was their use sufficiently wide that it deserves WP:DUE in the lead? HrafnTalkStalk(P) 18:36, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
- Thumbing (admittedly fairly quickly) through The Creationists the first contemporary usage of Creationism I can find (after Clark's) is in the title of Morris' Scientific Creationism (1974). The progression in the mainstream seems to be 'Deluge' (particularly 'Deluge Geology') in the 40s-50s to 'Creation' ('Progressive Creation' & 'Creation Research Society') in the 50s-60s, with Creationism becoming widespread reasonably late. Any early conflict over the use of it would therefore seem to be quite low-intensity. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 18:52, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
- I've tended to accept Ron Numbers, "For decades to come various Christian groups, from flood geologists to theistic evolutionists, squabbled over which camp most deserved to use the creationist label." However, looking at my 1985 Chambers Concise dictionary, I was surprised to find only the anti-evolution sense, so that meaning had taken hold in the UK by then. Ruse 2003 takes care to use the broad sense any believer / narrow sense antievolution distinction, but gives no indication of who uses the broad sense. I've had individual editors here take that view, but hardly a reliable source. However, still worth reviewing that paragraph to avoid the science = loss of belief suggestion as currently phrased, and to simplify it. . dave souza, talk 20:29, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
- Thumbing (admittedly fairly quickly) through The Creationists the first contemporary usage of Creationism I can find (after Clark's) is in the title of Morris' Scientific Creationism (1974). The progression in the mainstream seems to be 'Deluge' (particularly 'Deluge Geology') in the 40s-50s to 'Creation' ('Progressive Creation' & 'Creation Research Society') in the 50s-60s, with Creationism becoming widespread reasonably late. Any early conflict over the use of it would therefore seem to be quite low-intensity. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 18:52, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
<ri> Looking at Chapter 7 of Forster & Marston's 1999 Genesis Through History (pdf from here) p. 54:
Finally, the word ‘creationist’ is itself confusing. The
creatorship of God is central to Christianity, and it is in our view impossible to be any sort of a Christian without being a ‘creationist’. So to a Christian theist who believes that God can work through ‘natural’ processes, when does a so-called ‘progressive creationist’ become an ‘evolutionary creationist’? Exactly how much micro-evolution is acceptable? R L Numbers, having called his book The Creationists, seems to want to limit it (for some reason) to non-evolutionary creationists – though at
times is hard put to delineate them.
They cite Howard J. Van Till as one example of an "evolutionary creationist". . . dave souza, talk 21:24, 26 August 2009 (UTC)
- Numbers' "squabbled" does not necessarily mean a particularly intense or extensive conflict (and tends to support a fairly low-intensity & sporadic one) -- also (given "various Christian groups") one that may have involved YEC vs OEC conflicts & the like as much as (or more than) pro vs anti evolution.
- AFAIK the advocates of the viewpoint tend to term it 'evolutionary creation' not 'evolutionary creationism'.
HrafnTalkStalk(P) 05:35, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
With this definition, 'creationists' (a tiny group of people, principally in the US) have expanded their importance by representing most everyone on the planet. The definition is missing several necessary additions: (1) creationists believe traditional religions and traditional science are in conflict; and (2) creationists don't distinguish the objects of the physical & natural sciences from the subjects of religions, philosophies, and arts; and (3) creationists believe the word 'true' as used by scientists (which happily flips to false when science progresses) is the same word 'true' as used in philosophy and religions; and creationists believe scientific theories are judged by their explanations, not by examining their predictions. These beliefs distinguish creationists from most religious people and from scientists.
The question 'Did God have an influence in the evolution of man?' is not a scientific question. No consequence of this assumption can be tested by scientists. Most scientists I know have no objection to answering 'Yes': including those who have devoted their lives to evolutionary biology. Geologist (talk) 02:11, 10 September 2009 (UTC)
Genetic engineering, universe simulation etc.
Why does this article presuppose that creationism is a religious concept? Surely it is just the belief that the human species was created by some other being or group of beings, a belief that does not require that those beings would be Gods or supernatural - they may merely have been aliens using genetic engineering, or beings in an "outer universe" that have created this one as a simulation environment in which they engineer artificial creatures such as humans and other life (i.e. the Simulation hypothesis). Without the requirement that the creators were Gods, the definition would include the beliefs of Raëlism as a form of creationism. And what would the difference be between the creators of a simulation hypothesis universe and Gods anyway, as they would have the ultimate power to manipulate the universe and its physical laws, whilst occupying a space inaccessible from within the simulated universe? Is this not a form of creationism? Josh Keen (talk) 02:17, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
- Creationism could be about a lot of things, but in practice it is closely bound to religion. Very few people push the other views you mentioned. Johnuniq (talk) 04:20, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
- (edit conflict)Because creationism is ubiquitously religiously based -- read the book The Creationists. Those holding a viewpoint of a natural creator are only a 'tiny minority' (and thus not eligible for WP:DUE) nor do we have reliable sources expanding the definition of 'Creationism' to include them. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 04:27, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) As always, verification from reliable sources has shown that creationism has been used since 1929 for specific anti-evolution religious concepts, and before that has been used widely for a religious doctrine as well as being in limited use for the idea that species were created by direct divine intervention rather than by laws (or secondary causes in the words of the time). The beliefs of Raëlism include a form of creationism, and also appear to be a form of religion. . dave souza, talk 04:31, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
Is this edit really such a great idea?
In his works Mere Christianity and The Problem of Pain, Clive Staples Lewis describes the biblical account of Adam and Eve as a "true myth", as something with a factually correct metaphorical message not to be taken literally. He comments in chapter 33 of Mere Christianity that "Perhaps a modern man can understand the Christian idea best if he takes it in connection with Evolution." He describes the process of human evolution in The Problem of Pain by writing: "For long centuries God perfected the animal form which was to become the vehicle of humanity and the image of Himself. He gave it hands whose thumbs could be applied to each of its fingers, and jaws and teeth and the throat capable of articulation, and a brain sufficiently complex to execute all material motions whereby rational thought is incarnated."[5]
Merely being a prominent novelist (such as Lewis) does not make his opinion notable enough for inclusion in this article. Especially when the quotes mentioned don't have a very direct and explicit connection with creationism per se. Gabbe (talk) 08:55, 30 October 2009 (UTC)
- CS Lewis is also notable in the field of Christian apologetics, and was somewhere on the border between Theistic evolution and Creationism (and from what I've read tending publicly towards TE but privately towards Creo). I would however suggest that a good WP:SECONDARY source is needed. His association with Bernard Acworth (founder of the Evolution Protest Movement), and vacillation on the subject, garners him half a page in The Creationists. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 10:46, 30 October 2009 (UTC)
- I would however agree that the above material is pretty much irrelevant to this article's topic. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 10:47, 30 October 2009 (UTC)
- Lewis is a believer in evolution, and he refers to evolution positively in both books. Thus, he is perfectly in tune with all of the other statements in the section- since the purpose of the section is about those against Christian rejection of evolution. The Squicks (talk) 01:51, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
Privately, however, {Lewis} found Acworth's arguments against evolution increasingly compelling—and the pretensions of many biologists repellent. In 1951 he confessed that his belief in the unimportance of evolution had been shaken while reading one of his friend's {Acworth's} manuscripts. "I wish I were younger," he confided to Acworth. "What inclines me now to think that you might be right in regarding it [evolution] as the central and radical lie in the whole web of falsehood that now governs our lives is not so much your arguments against it as the fanatical and twisted attitudes of its defenders."
—The Creationists, Expanded Ed. p 175 (square brackets= Numbers' interpolations; curly-brackets=mine)HrafnTalkStalk(P) 03:20, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
- Ummm... what was the point of posting that? Because I see no point. Expressing thoughts of possible doubt in your belief at times absolutely does not mean anything. You can easily find quotes of Lewis saying that he has doubted whether or not God exists even after his conversion to Christianity. The Squicks (talk) 07:04, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
- I would regard stating that he "think[s] that [Acworth] might be right in regarding it [evolution] as the central and radical lie in the whole web of falsehood that now governs our lives" is going considerably more than "Expressing thoughts of possible doubt" -- it is "expressing" very strong doubts -- and thus relevant to evaluation of Lewis' earlier public comments. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 07:39, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
- Once again, Lewis had privately doubted his Christian faith with language that is almost identical to what you quoted about his faith in evolution. Does that mean, as you are seeming to suggest, that his Christianity was merely a public facade? The Squicks (talk) 18:51, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
- For the purposes of this article and hence this talk page, the question is whether we have a reliable secondary source about the relevance and significance of CS Lewis to creationism. The text above is cited to Gary Gilley at the Southern View Chapel website, who asserts that Lewis believed in theistic evolution, and concludes that "he was a man who rejected or minimized many of the most important truths given to us by God." No mention that I've found of creationism, and not an impressive source. Looks like an irrelevance, and undue weight to original research. Hrafn's source is good, but doesn't seem to indicate any great significance for this article. Lewis does get called in aid by intelligent design creationists, but they'd quote mine their own grandmothers and are not reliable secondary sources. . . dave souza, talk 19:31, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
- Once again, Lewis had privately doubted his Christian faith with language that is almost identical to what you quoted about his faith in evolution. Does that mean, as you are seeming to suggest, that his Christianity was merely a public facade? The Squicks (talk) 18:51, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
- I own Lewis' books, I could just as easily cite the exact page numbers for those quotes if you want. The Squicks (talk) 20:18, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
- The issue if of significance to the article subject, and per WP:V and WP:PSTS we need a reliable third party secondary source to base any paragraph or section about Lewis upon. We can't just synthesise our own opinion that the Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe had major influence on creation science, an expert opinion is needed. . . dave souza, talk 20:32, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
- I own Lewis' books, I could just as easily cite the exact page numbers for those quotes if you want. The Squicks (talk) 20:18, 31 October 2009 (UTC)
This discussion sort of derailed a bit. Are you (The Squicks) disputing my claim that Lewis is not notable enough for inclusion in this article? Because to me, it's a bit like quoting Tom Hanks' opinion on God and evolution. Sure, Hanks is a prominent actor, but how relevant is his opinion to an article on Creationism? Gabbe (talk) 21:42, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not sure what you mean. You're Tom Hanks comparison is so far out of left-field that I really don't know what to say. Lewis is one of the most prominent philosophical Christian apologists of the past 100 or so years. He has been described by some as "the Pope of Protestantism". He is a religious thinker the same way that Dietrich Bonhoeffer and Søren Kierkegaard were religious thinkers. If we quote Kierkegaard as a Christian philosopher, then we can quote Lewis as a Christian philosopher. The Squicks (talk) 23:46, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
- Without doubting his prominence as a philosphical Christian apologist, is there a secondary source confirming that his musings are prominent enough in relation to the general subject of creationism to be featured in this overview article? . . dave souza, talk 00:02, 2 November 2009 (UTC)
- Everything in that section is sourced to a primary source.
- The 19th-century Danish theologian and forebear of Christian existentialism, Søren Kierkegaard, also rejects appeals to creationism, saying that: I still do not demonstrate God's existence from [the natural] order of things, and even if I began I would never finish and also would be obliged continually to live in suspenso lest something so terrible happen that my fragment of demonstration would be ruined.
- This , which has been an accepted, consensus supported part of this article for a while, is sourced to a primary source. All I am advocating is that I include Lewis' opinions in the exact same fashion that ya'll have included Kierkegaard's opinions. The Squicks (talk) 00:10, 2 November 2009 (UTC)
- Please read WP:PSTS. Wikipedia strongly prefers WP:SECONDARY sources. This is particularly true where conflicting primary sources (in this case Lewis' public writings versus private letters to Acworth, archived in the Marion E. Wade Collection) suggest an ambiguity as to his views. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 03:51, 2 November 2009 (UTC)
- Then, you would not mind me taking out the Kierkegaard quote and the rest of the information? The Squicks (talk) 04:45, 2 November 2009 (UTC)
- I think removal of the the Kierkegaard quote would be justified, lacking a secondary source relating it to creationism. The text of the quote itself appears to be more a rejection of natural theology than creationism. As to "the rest of the information" (if that is taken beyond this quote & its framing), that needs to be decided on a case by case basis. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 05:06, 2 November 2009 (UTC)
- Ah, I see. So by "famous author" you (The Squicks) meant "notable Christian apologist" rather than "bestselling novelist". Then your argument makes much more sense, I apologise for my misunderstanding. Nevertheless, I'm with Hrafn on this one, since a secondary source has not been attributed for making the connection between Creationism and the quotes by Kierkegaard and Lewis I support removing them both. Gabbe (talk) 09:39, 2 November 2009 (UTC)
- Agree with removing Kierkegaard quotes, I can only find very obscure and indirect connections between creationism and Kierkegaard.[6]][7] However, not "Everything in that section is sourced to a primary source" – the Archbish of Canterbury speaking directly about modern creationism is sourced to the Grauniad. Murphy's opinions are cited: he is evidently a published author on creationism, cited in Debating Design: From Darwin to DNA and quoted at more length on the subject in this book, which might be a useful secondary source for the section. No doubt others can be found. . . . dave souza, talk 11:04, 2 November 2009 (UTC)
'Christian critique' section more generally
The closer I look at this section, the more I come around to The Squicks view of "taking out … the rest of the information".
Too many authors, who express no explicit view on creationism, are baldly cited within the article for support of the 'Christian critique'.
The most ridiculous example is Martin Luther who, given his Biblically-literalist views on geocentricity, would appear to be right at home with the YEC crowd, were he alive today. That some authors have based their criticism of creationism, in part, on his criticism of 'Glory Theology', does not make him a critic of creationism, and he should not be presented as such.
We should not be presenting 'XXX criticised <something-that-was-not-creationism>' explicitly or implicitly as rejection of creationism.
At most we should state that 'YYY criticised creationism, and based this on XXX's criticism of <something-that-was-not-creationism>' -- but even then only when that 'basis' is sufficiently relevant.
I have removed again the Kierkegaard material, as it both implicitly and explicitly ("He rejects appeals to creationism") presents him as rejecting creationism, when none of the sources state that he did so (only that they do so, and cite his work as support for their position). HrafnTalkStalk(P) 04:00, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
- The Kierkegaard material has been re-added, sans the explicit claim that he rejects creationism. However, the bald statement of his views in a section on the 'Christian critique' of creationism still contains the implicit claim that he was 'critiquing' it, which is WP:SYNTH. Unless the material is itself a critique of creationism, or is explicitly discussed as part of somebody else's critique (though see my "but even then only when that 'basis' is sufficiently relevant" point above), it would appear to be both (i) off-topic & (ii) misleading, to mention it within this article. I will not re-delete the Kierkegaard material myself (at least not yet), so as to avoid an WP:EDITWAR, but would fully support its removal by another editor. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 06:17, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
"Allah" vs "God"
AFAIK, most Muslims use 'Allah', even when speaking in English (most probably because Islam privileges Arabic, as the original language of the Koran, above other languages). It would therefore seem more appropriate to use 'Allah' rather than 'God' in the context of "Islamic Creationism". I will not revert to change this, but would support any editor who does so, and would disapprove of any attempt to change it back to 'God'. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 03:55, 5 November 2009 (UTC)
- MOS:ISLAM recommends using God instead of Allah. Gabbe (talk) 07:58, 5 November 2009 (UTC)
- Fair enough. Have also linked to God in Islam per that MOS. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 08:26, 5 November 2009 (UTC)
"Prevalence" section
How large was the sample?
67.148.120.103 (talk)stardingo747 —Preceding undated comment added 01:51, 29 November 2009 (UTC).
- There are several polls and surveys mentioned in that section. Which one are you refering to? Gabbe (talk) 02:19, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
Christianity section - none of the creation theories are based on Christ's teachings.... they should be labelled biblical creationism not Christian creationism
Am I the only one baffled by the listing of ideas not based on New Testament texts as "types of Christian creationism"?
I fail to see how anyone can mix up the contents of these ideas about "creation" with Christianity. As far as I can see, Christ did not have any input into these theories nor are they based in any way on His life, His teachings, or those of his immediate followers. How can they legitimately be called Christian? Personally I am offended by this.
Whilst it is undoubtedly true that (in America especially) there are some Christians that pay attention to the Old Testament, the truth is that only the New Testament is truly a Christian text. These people are not following Christ when they give credance to works written before He came to us. I think we should label these ideas as Biblical creationism and not Christian creationism. --Hauskalainen (talk) 04:04, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
- The only time I've ever seen or read about Christians claiming that the Gospels were divinely inspired while that the older Hebrew texts were not divine were those behind Positive Christianity under the Nazis, who viewed the older texts as inferior "Jewish" influences.
- Other than that, I believe that there's essentially no prominent sources that can be cited that support your view. Of course, I mean no offense to your particular sect or belief group- I respect your right to believe what you do- but it's clearly a fringe view among Christians. The Squicks (talk) 05:16, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
- I miswrote. It was late when I wrote that. I meant to write FULL credance. The ascription of the texts as being Christian, is wrong because that cannot be. The works in the Old Testament are pre-Christian. That is undeniable. If they are pre-Christian they cannot be Christian. That Christians regard PARTS of the Old Testament as divinely inspired is not in question, but most do not regard them as wholly the true Word because there are many passages therein that do not sccord with the teachings of Christ. Faith in the Trinity does not allow both the entire Old testament and the New Testament to be regarded as divine unless one makes excuses. Therefore Christian circles I move in are much more selective as to what they choose to take from the Old Testament. That SOME Christians (especially in the U.S.) are more inclined to give divine credence to the entire Old Testament is not in doubt, but that does not make the description "Christian" correct as an adjective for the creationists beliefs. There are very very many Christians that do not regard the creation story in Genesis as being entirely correct, nor do many of us adhere to these theories. Hence Biblical is prefereable to Christian because they stem from words in the bible and not the words of Christ.--Hauskalainen (talk) 10:39, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
- Have boldly changed the "types of Christian creationism" heading to "types of creationism" – it includes specifically Judaic ideas of evolutionary creationism, and also includes Theistic evolution which covers Christians opposed to literalist creationism. While the texts are Old Iestament, I've seen creationists referring to Christ's teachings that these old testament texts are to be accepted or believed: don't have the source immediately to hand. So, from their viewpoint the New Testament incorporates and supports these earlier texts. . . dave souza, talk 10:54, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
- " I've seen creationists referring to Christ's teachings that these old testament texts are to be accepted or believed". I thnk we'd all love to see that! Especially with the reference to New Testament scripture where Christ teaches this...... You'd better invest the time asap in finding that reference!--Hauskalainen (talk) 13:51, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
- I'd better pull together some more important articles, or go for a walk, or finish my coffee. However, being easily diverted, I've done the googling that you seem to be unable to do. See this article, and this may also be useful. No need to thank me effusively, dave souza, talk 23:57, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
- " I've seen creationists referring to Christ's teachings that these old testament texts are to be accepted or believed". I thnk we'd all love to see that! Especially with the reference to New Testament scripture where Christ teaches this...... You'd better invest the time asap in finding that reference!--Hauskalainen (talk) 13:51, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
- Have boldly changed the "types of Christian creationism" heading to "types of creationism" – it includes specifically Judaic ideas of evolutionary creationism, and also includes Theistic evolution which covers Christians opposed to literalist creationism. While the texts are Old Iestament, I've seen creationists referring to Christ's teachings that these old testament texts are to be accepted or believed: don't have the source immediately to hand. So, from their viewpoint the New Testament incorporates and supports these earlier texts. . . dave souza, talk 10:54, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
- I miswrote. It was late when I wrote that. I meant to write FULL credance. The ascription of the texts as being Christian, is wrong because that cannot be. The works in the Old Testament are pre-Christian. That is undeniable. If they are pre-Christian they cannot be Christian. That Christians regard PARTS of the Old Testament as divinely inspired is not in question, but most do not regard them as wholly the true Word because there are many passages therein that do not sccord with the teachings of Christ. Faith in the Trinity does not allow both the entire Old testament and the New Testament to be regarded as divine unless one makes excuses. Therefore Christian circles I move in are much more selective as to what they choose to take from the Old Testament. That SOME Christians (especially in the U.S.) are more inclined to give divine credence to the entire Old Testament is not in doubt, but that does not make the description "Christian" correct as an adjective for the creationists beliefs. There are very very many Christians that do not regard the creation story in Genesis as being entirely correct, nor do many of us adhere to these theories. Hence Biblical is prefereable to Christian because they stem from words in the bible and not the words of Christ.--Hauskalainen (talk) 10:39, 1 November 2009 (UTC)
- The Old Testament is accepted by Christians as having equal authority with the New Testament. A big reason is Jesus Himself had a very high view of the Old Testament. For example, "I tell you the truth, until heaven and earth disappear, not the smallest letter, not the least stroke of a pen, will by any means disappear from the Law until everything is accomplished." (Matthew 5:18, NIV) Genesis is part of the Torah, which is the Law.--Jorfer (talk) 21:21, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
- These verses from Jesus are used to back up the canonicity of the Old Testament: Luke 24:44-46, Luke 24:27, John 5:39, Matt. 4:4,7,10, and Luke 11:51. These verses make clear that Jesus viewed the Old Testament as truthful. This does leave room for interpretation as to what kind of truth it contains (literal or metaphorical) but does not leave room for significant inaccuracy. Jesus expected the Jews to believe He was The Messiah on His embodiment of the Old Testament, which requires the Old Testament be a reliable source.--Jorfer (talk) 21:51, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
- Since Jesus Christ is God (second member of the Trinity, known as the only begotten Son of God) as John writes in his Gospel and God inspired the Old Testament writers, then Jesus Christ inspired the Old Testament writers. Therefore, the Old Testament is Christian. (You may disagree with either or both premises, so then replace "since" with "if").66.53.221.160 (talk) 04:38, 9 December 2009 (UTC)
- (1) This topic is an argument from silence, which is not a strong argument style. (1a) The reported Jesus was strangely silent about lots of things. (1b) Most of what Jesus mentioned was criticism of contemporary Torah interpretation; anything he didn't mention, he must have agreed with. (2) The first chapter of Matthew gives lineage from Abraham to Jesus (3) Paul (and John) decided what Christianity was, not Jesus. (4) 2 Timothy 3:16 says ALL scripture is "god-breathed" (5) in Galatians 3:16, Paul examines trivial details of Genesis and comes to his doctrinal conclusion (6) The first council of Nicaea determined the codex of the Bible, included the Sadducee OT, and thus wrote "Christianity". It doesn't matter if Bob The Builder penned the OT; once it was appropriated by Roman Christians, it became "Christian". (7) Sure, Gnostic Christians don't believe in the OT, so we can't blame it on them. Bipedia (talk) 14:25, 11 December 2009 (UTC)
'Judaism and Christianity' intro
The introductory paragraph to this section makes a number of WP:OR (or possibly WP:SYNTH) conclusions:
- "creationism based on Genesis owes more to Judaism than to Christ's own teaching" -- I'm fairly sure there're passages of the New Testament that Creos point to as Jesus reaffirming the truth of the Old.
- "Although some Christians today still believe in creationism based on Genesis, they are following an earlier Jewish tradition" -- this is particularly dodgy, as there does not seem to be a particularly strong "Jewish tradition" of Biblical literalism -- that is mainly a Christian (and particularly a Protestant) view.
Even the following should probably have a ref:
- "Most Christians regard the books of the Old Testament, including the Torah, as holy and revered as being inspired by God"
HrafnTalkStalk(P) 11:27, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
- Whoever wrote these things was uninformed about the development of early thinking on creation. The first line of Genesis is normally translated: "In the beginning God created the heavens (note the plural) and the earth, and the earth was empty and without form..." In fact the Hebrew is inherently ambiguous, and can equally be translated "In the beginning of God's creating, when the everything (i.e., the heavens and the Earth) was empty and formless..." (The second is the translation used by Rashi, for example). In the second translation God's work isn't one of creation, ("everything" already exists), but of ordering. The bias towards the first meaning began with the Hellenistic Jewish philosopher Philo of Alexandria, who was heavily influenced by Greek Platonism. The Greeks were the first to point out that the world must have had a beginning, a point prior to which it did not exist; Philo saw the logic of this and taught accordingly. His writings were immensely influential among the early Christians (the more intellectual ones), and formed the basis of the idea that God existed prior to the world, which he created. Gradually this came to be the dominant view in Judaism as well, but it wasn't the original view.PiCo (talk) 11:10, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
- Would you have sources to hand that you could use to rewrite this? Actually, I suspect a whole article on 'Development of Jewish and Christian interpretations of the Old Testament' (or similar) would probably be warranted if somebody could find the time and the sources. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 04:03, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
- == 'Judaism and Christianity' intro ==
The introductory paragraph to this section makes a number of WP:OR (or possibly WP:SYNTH) conclusions:
- "creationism based on Genesis owes more to Judaism than to Christ's own teaching" -- I'm fairly sure there're passages of the New Testament that Creos point to as Jesus reaffirming the truth of the Old.
- "Although some Christians today still believe in creationism based on Genesis, they are following an earlier Jewish tradition" -- this is particularly dodgy, as there does not seem to be a particularly strong "Jewish tradition" of Biblical literalism -- that is mainly a Christian (and particularly a Protestant) view.
Even the following should probably have a ref:
- "Most Christians regard the books of the Old Testament, including the Torah, as holy and revered as being inspired by God"
HrafnTalkStalk(P) 11:27, 3 November 2009 (UTC)
- Whoever wrote these things was uninformed about the development of early thinking on creation. The first line of Genesis is normally translated: "In the beginning God created the heavens (note the plural) and the earth, and the earth was empty and without form..." In fact the Hebrew is inherently ambiguous, and can equally be translated "In the beginning of God's creating, when the everything (i.e., the heavens and the Earth) was empty and formless..." (The second is the translation used by Rashi, for example). In the second translation God's work isn't one of creation, ("everything" already exists), but of ordering. The bias towards the first meaning began with the Hellenistic Jewish philosopher Philo of Alexandria, who was heavily influenced by Greek Platonism. The Greeks were the first to point out that the world must have had a beginning, a point prior to which it did not exist; Philo saw the logic of this and taught accordingly. His writings were immensely influential among the early Christians (the more intellectual ones), and formed the basis of the idea that God existed prior to the world, which he created. Gradually this came to be the dominant view in Judaism as well, but it wasn't the original view.PiCo (talk) 11:10, 29 November 2009 (UTC)
- Would you have sources to hand that you could use to rewrite this? Actually, I suspect a whole article on 'Development of Jewish and Christian interpretations of the Old Testament' (or similar) would probably be warranted if somebody could find the time and the sources. HrafnTalkStalk(P) 04:03, 30 November 2009 (UTC)
- Evolutionists should be careful of not falling into the historicist trap, seeing the contemporary age of scientific modernity as less deluded than any given point in the past. Actually, in my perception, such a faith in the progress of humanity due to the rationality and modern science (most often etnocentrically defined) resonates with a theleology usually more characteristic of who evolutionists opposes. And Creationists, who find evolution and science problematic, should start to read the Bible they proclaim as fundamental. With the following I reply to the request mentioned above: I find it improbable that pre-modern christian theologicans, philosophers like Martin Luther, for instant, when heralding a literal interpretation of the days of creation were as illiterate as some creationists today. We need to keep in mind that evolution versus creation is a pretty modern discussion. My argument is simple. I think it is probable that I'm not the first to read that the stars, the Sun and the Moon, in that order, were not created until the fourth day of Creation. It is unbelievable clear in regard of the dispute: "God said, "Let there be lights in the expanse of sky to divide the day from the night; and let them be for signs, and for seasons, and for days and years; [15] and let them be for lights in the expanse of sky to give light on the earth," and it was so. [16] God made the two great lights: the greater light to rule the day, and the lesser light to rule the night. He also made the stars. [17] God set them in the expanse of sky to give light to the earth, [18] and to rule over the day and over the night, and to divide the light from the darkness. God saw that it was good. [19] There was evening and there was morning, a fourth day." [8]. Not only didn't the dinosaurs exist in the first days of creation. The Sun, the Moon, The Stars that marks the seasons and the days, did not exist until the fourth day. So, the real mystery is why at all this discussion exist. A less stratified (i.e. materialistic) interpretation of taking the days of creation literally, as in the case of Luther, implies that an ordinary week may be read as an emanation of the sacred week of creation. In other words, Time itself is perceived as an unfolding of the divine will, different aspects of the Godhead. That is for those who have restored their perception of sacred reality. By no means is a linear understanding of time more (or less) scientific than a cyclic one. I hope that it is understood, that I'm not adressing a particular point of view, a personal faith, but aspiring for a less totalizing paradigm (example) as the basis of discourse in regard of both the scientific and religious aproach to existence. It is possible to have a scientific approach to religious sentiments, even understand it without necessarily being subject to whatever particular faith in question. --Xact (talk) 05:07, 25 December 2009 (UTC)
Original research on relationship to book of Genesis
Hauskalainen (talk · contribs) has repeatedly added the following sentence at the start of the Judaism and Christianity section:
The Book of Genesis predates Christianity and forms part of the Torah, a Hebrew Jewish scripture and therefore creationism based on Genesis owes more to Judaism than to Christ's own teaching.
While the first part up to the comma may seem a truism, the conclusions then drawn from it are clearly original research and as such unacceptable without verification from a reliable source presenting the same conclusions. Hauskalainen. please present a source for the statement, and discuss it here before re-adding a statement that several editors find problematic. Thanks, dave souza, talk 22:59, 7 December 2009 (UTC)
Now that the block on my editing has been lifted I want to return the disucssion to the point that had been added to the article (and multiply deleted) that Christian belief based on Genesis is primarily related to earlier Jewish beliefs being based entirely on a jewish text predating Christ. Although Jews and Christians both believe in the Old Testament, their interpretations can be different and Jews and Christians mostly diverge on the teachings of Christ and Christ's place in faith. These differences arise from the teachings of Christ and of Christian scholars that came after him. It is of course a truism that Christians founding their belief in creationism on a book of the Torah are essentially following a an earlier Jewish faith and not the word of Christ who actually spoke of nothing about the mechanism of creation and the means by which God had created the world. It seems to me that editors who removed my reference to Christians believing in the literal truth of Genesis are primarily sourcing their belief on a Jewish text did so because they do not want that to be "revealed" (though clearly it is blindingly obvious to many). Now, I have been accused of breaching WP:AGF in doing so, but that is because I find their argument (that it needs someone scholarly to have said this) to be wholly unconvincing. But to get around the argument I would like those editors to tell me how the article can make the point (that belief in Creation based on Genesis is primarily built on an earlier Jewish belief and not on the teachings of Christ). That is fundamentally true and I believe that the point should clearly be made in the article. Christian scholars mostly assume that most Christians do not have to have such a thing pointed out to them, but there will be people reading Wikipedia who do not know this.
- Incidental note: This is not the first time I have met this kind of difficulty in editing Wikipedia. I had the same problem with an article on health care in the UK when I stated in WP that losing one's job in the UK does not result in losing access to health care because health care is provided by the government. An American insisted that I had to find a British source that said that losing a job does not result in losing access to health care, but no British source would ever write such a thing because the very notion (that health care access should be tied to employment) is, in British eyes, ridiculous. The only way to prove the point was to appeal to logic. It went to arbitration and of course it came back that it was not necessary to provide a source for such a thing that was obvious from logic. I regard this dispute about the Christian faith in Genesis (by some Christians at least) as owing more to Judaism than to the teachings of Christ as being in the same category as the health care dispute. The test of this is for the person(s) opposing this statement to give good reasons in logic for their doing so. As far as I can see, there are none and I challenge them to provide some before I take this to arbitration. Or, if we can come up with a form of words which expresses the intent without offending the sensibilities of those who deleted my edit then maybe we can avoid going to dispute resolution on this one. But that puts the onus on them to make the first move.--Hauskalainen (talk) 12:22, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Before I reply, could you provide a link to this arbitration discussion? The one that "came back that it was not necessary to provide a source for such a thing that was obvious from logic"? Gabbe (talk) 12:48, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- It wouldn't have gone to arbitration, ArbCom doesn't deal with content issues, etc. " it will not make editorial statements or decisions about how articles should read ("content decisions"), and users should not ask the Committee to make these kinds of decisions, as it will not do so." I suspect the editor is talking about something like the Wikipedia:No original research/Noticeboard. Dougweller (talk) 13:03, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Before I reply, could you provide a link to this arbitration discussion? The one that "came back that it was not necessary to provide a source for such a thing that was obvious from logic"? Gabbe (talk) 12:48, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
(unindent)Hauskalainen, your edit was "The Book of Genesis predates Christianity and forms part of the Torah, a Hebrew Jewish scripture and therefore creationism based on Genesis owes more to Judaism than to Christ's own teaching." First, there's the problem of 'Christ's own teaching' which is not encyclopedic. 'Christ' is a title & not only do we not use titles this way, this particular title is used to acknowledge divinity. Then there's the issue of whether we know what Jesus taught at all. But I think the basic problem is that ' Christian creationism' is an interpretation of the Bible by Christians, not by Jews, and that's optional. You can't blame the Torah for the way some Christians interpret it. This is not at all similar to your health care dispute. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Dougweller (talk • contribs) 13:25, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
Gabbe: I used the word arbitration very loosely. I meant dispute resolution but as this was several years ago I cannot remember which route was taken or even which article it was discussed in. I edit very many health care articles. However, the issue is very clear in my mind because an editor asked for a reference about something so obvious ´(to a Brit at least). I have no intention of trawling my past edits to look for this but you can do so if you wish. The point is, I think, very clear.
Dougweller: You are right. It was not to the arbitration committee. My bad use of words unfortunately. (See my reply to Gabbe above). As to the point you make about interpretation, I agree, but the point is that they are interpreting a document that pre-dates Christ and which is a fundamental text of another religion. That is the point I want the article to make. The parallel to the healthcare argument is what I regard as an unreasonable calling for a citation for something that is fundamentally very obvious from pure logic. Below is text which Gabbe posted at my TALK page.
The bit you included was "The Book of Genesis predates Christianity and forms part of the Torah, a Hebrew Jewish scripture and therefore creationism based on Genesis owes more to Judaism than to Christ's own teaching."
In that sentence, the following five statements are made (either explicitly or implicitly): P1) The Book of Genesis predates Christianity P2) The Book of Genesis forms part of the Torah P3) The Torah is a Hebrew Jewish scripture C) Creationism based on Genesis owes more to Judaism than to Christ's own teaching. S) P1, P2 and P3 together lead to C
All five of them must be attributable in order to meet the threshold for inclusion. For the statements P1, P2 and P3 sourcing would be trivial, any decent book on the history of Christianity would suffice. I don't think a citation for those three statements would add anything to the article. So far I think we are all in perfect agreement. Statements C and S, however, may well be true – but are less trivial to verify. For them a citation would (in my view) be prudent. Specifically, if there isn't a source for S, it is an example of novel synthesis. Remember that the onus is on you.
Also, let me again emphasise that the reason you were blocked was edit-warring, not including the sentence marked in green. If, for example, you had been editing the article World War II, and someone asked you for a source that WW2 ended in 1945, violating WP:3RR on that article would likewise in all likelihood have gotten you (or anyone else for that matter) blocked. Gabbe (talk) 08:46, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
I assume that Gabbe meant to tell us P1 P2 and P3 are all propositions, that C is a conclusion and that this is based on the Supposition S that P1 P2 and P3 taken together can only lead us to that conclusion. Of that is so, then he has indeed summed up the issue quite well. He seems to accept that it would be easy to get sources for P1 P2 and P3 so these are not really propositions as much as fact. We could label then as F1 F2 and F3 for argument but I don't think that is really at issue. He accepts (or seems to accept that C and S may well be true), but like my detractor in the health care issue, he wants a reference for someone else coming to the same conclusion. Well, just as it was not necessary for me to provide a reference for stating the obvious (that losing one's job in in the UK does not result in the loss of health care) I would argue that it is not necessary to obtain a citation for someone saying because F1 F2 and F3 are true, C must be true. One can argue the case using logic. Now WP: does state that using mathematical transformations does not breach WP:NOR has this to say on "Routine calculations".
This policy does not forbid routine calculations, such as adding numbers, converting units, or calculating a person's age, provided editors agree that the arithmetic and its application correctly reflect the information published by the sources from which it is derived.
I know its pushing it a bit but pure logic is involved in if P1=TRUE and P2=TRUE and P3=TRUE then C=TRUE.
Now we can argue perhaps what is the right way to phrase C (in other words "Creationism based on Genesis owes more to Judaism than to Christ's own teaching" is not really a proper conclusion without an examination of Christ's teaching), so I think I can be flexible (you might argue we need to be more rigid) about what C should say. But the issue really is that Christians that do take a literal interpretation of Genesis are using a ancient jewish text rather than relying on anything which scripture tells us that Jesus said. That is what I think needs to be said. It may be obvious to you and me, but like the health care issue, it clearly nay be not so transparent to others. --Hauskalainen (talk) 15:36, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
It may help if my detractors could give us an example of why, if P1 P2 and P3 are true then under what circumstances might C NOT be true. That may help us to get a better definition of C (as per my example above, i.e. that we have not examined what Christ actually did say).--Hauskalainen (talk) 15:41, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- If you are so sure, take it to WP:NOR. That's the appropriate place for this discussion. Dougweller (talk) 16:02, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- The more energy (and space) someone dedicates to laying out his or her argument about a certain point, the more likely it is that the editor is violating NOR, because NOR forbids us from putting our own arguments (no matter how logical) into articles. period. Now, we can put in significant views from reliable sources. So, Hauskalainen, just find a verifiable source that makes this argument. That is all. Do what all editors of an encyclopedia do, do research (read books on the history of creationism, read the Anchor Bible volumes on Genesis and the four Gospels, etc) and see if any scholar has made this argument. If one has, and you have a citation, put it in! Otherwise, move on. Slrubenstein | Talk 16:26, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- I agree with Dougweller, at this point a query on WP:NORN would seem the most reasonable course of action. Gabbe (talk) 16:53, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
Cannot even one of you make an argument that the opposite could be true? By which I mean that that Creationism based on Genesis owes more to the teachings of Christ than it does to Genesis, a founding Jewish scripture? I think if someone could do that we could have a real dispute on outr hands. At the moment it seems a bit one sided. --Hauskalainen (talk) 17:02, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Why is it so difficult for you to provide a source? I could argue that Christ taught Genesis according to his own interpretation and that's what his followers adhere to today. --NeilN talk to me 17:14, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- That might be a valid argument if you could get a WP:RS to cite. Jesus said he was not trying to overturn the Old Law but he was not talking about Genesis. I know of no one who regards the creation story as law.--Hauskalainen (talk) 17:31, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- That's my point! You're assuming people who are reading the article have some knowledge about the Torah/Bible/Christ's teachings. Having only a "pop culture" knowledge of the three, I was able to make a plausible argument rebutting your proposed addition. If I added it in the article, you or someone else would have removed it and asked that I provide sources. You need to provide sources not to convince people who are knowledgeable about the subject, but to show readers unfamiliar with the subject that a reliable source has made that judgement. --NeilN talk to me 17:48, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Not so. What you created was a false proposition P. My argument is that pure logic supports a certain conclusion C based on P1 P2 and P3 which are petty much irrefutable (though I would modify C slightly from the original text).--Hauskalainen (talk) 17:56, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- You're still not getting it. My proposition was false but plausible to people unfamiliar with the subject. Bottom line: arguing here that you don't need a source won't get you anywhere. You'll have to take it "up the chain" if you want but it'd be much more productive if you just provide a source. --NeilN talk to me 18:07, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Not so. What you created was a false proposition P. My argument is that pure logic supports a certain conclusion C based on P1 P2 and P3 which are petty much irrefutable (though I would modify C slightly from the original text).--Hauskalainen (talk) 17:56, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- That's my point! You're assuming people who are reading the article have some knowledge about the Torah/Bible/Christ's teachings. Having only a "pop culture" knowledge of the three, I was able to make a plausible argument rebutting your proposed addition. If I added it in the article, you or someone else would have removed it and asked that I provide sources. You need to provide sources not to convince people who are knowledgeable about the subject, but to show readers unfamiliar with the subject that a reliable source has made that judgement. --NeilN talk to me 17:48, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- That might be a valid argument if you could get a WP:RS to cite. Jesus said he was not trying to overturn the Old Law but he was not talking about Genesis. I know of no one who regards the creation story as law.--Hauskalainen (talk) 17:31, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- We don't have to make an argument that the opposite is true. See WP:BURDEN: "The burden of evidence lies with the editor who adds or restores material." Gabbe (talk) 17:23, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- That is what the opposition argument centred on in the health care argument. The argument was overturned because one can appeal to logic.--Hauskalainen (talk) 17:31, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- "Overturned"? By whom? Has someone claimed the authority to settle content disputes? Gabbe (talk) 18:15, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Not comparable, but I've raised the issue here: [9]. Please take the discussion there as you aren't convincing anyone here. Thanks. Dougweller (talk) 18:04, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- The very use of the word "therefore" is a pretty obvious indication of a synthesis. The sentence also seems to add little to the article. Perhaps the idea that the culture wars is all the Jews fault? I can't see how it adds information to the page beyond a bit of tautology, and very much support its removal.
- One can't appeal to logic, that's original research. WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules:simple/complex 18:47, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- That is what the opposition argument centred on in the health care argument. The argument was overturned because one can appeal to logic.--Hauskalainen (talk) 17:31, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
<ri> As it happens, the source cited for much of the passage deals with the significance of the Torah and early Jewish readings of Genesis, as well as the first Christian approaches. I've therefore reorganised the opening paragraphs to reflect that source more accurately, putting things in a chronological sequence without unsourced "appeal to logic". One of the links to the other source gave a 404 page, so have replaced it with the index to the section including the second link, and have made it clearer that this is a translation of Philo. . . dave souza, talk 23:17, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
Hideous POV issues
Firstly, who is anyone to say that any theory is a myth, and then at the same time say that they are neutral? What is the definition of neutral? Especially considering theories commonly accepted, such as the Genesis theory. I, for one, absolutely believe in the Genesis theory, and also believe that God may have carried out these actions through evolution as the Bible doesn't say that God piled everything together with his hands. Apparently, we came from dust, isn't it possible that God created us just as said in the Bible, and that when he said for us to be that we evolved, not by chance, but through intelligent design? Furthermore, would the people who deny the evolution theory entirely consider this to be NPOV? These articles have been responsible for a lot of criticism of Wikipedia, which could greatly be reduced if we were to simply neutralize these articles. PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 02:26, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Wikipedia is an encyclopedia and therefore articles are based on fact and scientific observations rather than belief systems. We should not be using the word theory when the phrase Philosophical theory is appropriate. --NeilN talk to me 02:46, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Still yet, there has to be words other than "myth" that we can use, and not just for the Genesis "account," but for the other popular beliefs as well. Fact is it's believed by many, and cannot be proved wrong anymore than it can be proved correct, so "myth" is not here. PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 02:52, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- I think you're a little confused about the term myth. I just check Oxford's Dictionary of the Bible and it tells me that the term myth
- covers those stories or narratives which describe the actions of the other-worldly in terms of this world, in both OT and NT. In Genesis, the Creation and the Fall are myths, and are markedly similar to the creation stories of Israel's Near Eastern neighbours. It was a mistake of expositors and preachers in the past to treat these chapters as ‘historical’ accounts of the origin of the universe and the cause of original sin. There are also myths in OT (e.g. Isa. 25: 7) and NT (e.g. Matt. 24: 31) to express beliefs about the end of the world and God's judgement. Some theologians use the term ‘myth’ to denote a way of expressing intimations of supernatural significance; they are rendered intelligible by means of familiar terms derived from valid natural experience.
- Cheers, Ben (talk) 02:58, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- I think you're a little confused about the term myth. I just check Oxford's Dictionary of the Bible and it tells me that the term myth
- Still yet, there has to be words other than "myth" that we can use, and not just for the Genesis "account," but for the other popular beliefs as well. Fact is it's believed by many, and cannot be proved wrong anymore than it can be proved correct, so "myth" is not here. PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 02:52, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
The words 'sledgehammer' and 'nut' keep jumping into my head as I read this. Can't everyone just agree that the word 'myth' has particular connotations in the mind of the average reader, that it's therefore, probably, offensive to tens of millions of Christian readers and just replace it with something else. Why are non-believers so determined to have their way in things like this? And I don't want to burst your little Wiki bubble guys, but when it comes to the accuracy of terminology in this resource, one of the longest ever discussions held here centred on whether an article about the Northern Irish town of Londonderry should be headed 'Londonderry' or 'Derry'. It is still, despite overwhelming evidence to the contrary, incorrectly headed 'Derry' - again, sadly lacking in the factual neutrality that people expect from encyclopedias81.156.0.191 (talk) 10:28, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- There's no justification for describing Genesis as anything other than a "myth". It is treated equally with all other creation myths, and isn't separated out for any special criticism or praise, which is what NPOV demands. NPOV doesn't demand that we elevate any creation myth to the status of scientific theory.—Kww(talk) 03:25, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Indeed, it should not be praised or denied on the project. Neither should any other account for the Earth's existance IMHO unless there's definate proof, thus making it fact. PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 03:31, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- e/cYes, that's explained in the thread directly above this one as a matter of fact, which I didn't notice at first, but did shortly after starting the thread. It is actually indeed a valid term to use here, but would the average reader know this? Some people will automatically associate it with "myth" as in Mythbusters for example. Perhaps instead of getting rid of the word "myth" we could explain what exactly constitutes a "myth" in a way that clearly separates the use of the term from it's use in MythBusters? I still think this article is off balance however, because it seems to be pro evolution theory, which has been enough to set more than a few notable figures on fire with the project. The word myth was not originally what caught my attention; I first noticed how it was written like "creationists reject science and reason." PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 03:31, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- I don't think this article is a suitable place to get into the details of the word myth any more than I think the evolution article is a suitable place to get into the details of the word theory. However, we make use of wikilinks to aid the curious reader. Cheers, Ben (talk) 04:30, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- e/cYes, that's explained in the thread directly above this one as a matter of fact, which I didn't notice at first, but did shortly after starting the thread. It is actually indeed a valid term to use here, but would the average reader know this? Some people will automatically associate it with "myth" as in Mythbusters for example. Perhaps instead of getting rid of the word "myth" we could explain what exactly constitutes a "myth" in a way that clearly separates the use of the term from it's use in MythBusters? I still think this article is off balance however, because it seems to be pro evolution theory, which has been enough to set more than a few notable figures on fire with the project. The word myth was not originally what caught my attention; I first noticed how it was written like "creationists reject science and reason." PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 03:31, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Indeed, it should not be praised or denied on the project. Neither should any other account for the Earth's existance IMHO unless there's definate proof, thus making it fact. PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 03:31, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Calling them all myth keeps us within our NPOV policy. Using the word 'theory' would be absolutely wrong and confusing as it's a scientific term and this is not about science. Dougweller (talk) 06:32, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Well, considering that "myth" has connotations of untruth for some readers maybe we can find some other NPOV word for this article, and it seems to me that "account" or "story" both would be acceptable for all creation myths. Myth is used in the specific sence mentioned above mostly in academia, and since the main purpose of this article isn't biblical exegesis I think we could use some other, less technical term.Sjö (talk) 13:39, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
/agreed81.156.0.191 (talk) 18:51, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- This issue comes up quite frequently. Any motion to change from using the word "myth" is unlikely to make headway unless someone reviews and understands that -massive- amount of conversation on the subject and can provide some novel reasons and sources that would make such a change acceptable for Wikipedia.Quietmarc (talk) 19:47, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
Myth issues aside
The article still seems of balance. For example, the article states "Most Christians around the world today accept evolution as the most likely explanation for the origins of life, and do not take a literal view of the Genesis creation myth." It seems to imply that creationism, or at least the literal belief in the accounts for creation, is dying. Bottom line is I've heard more than one complaint that Wikipedia is "atheist," and articles related to creationism and evolution are often cited. PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 03:59, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Viewed on a world-wide basis, belief in Genesis and similar myths as literal fact is dying. To state otherwise would be misrepresenting reality. The article doesn't represent this as a good or a bad thing, because that would be an NPOV violation.—Kww(talk) 04:17, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- Yep. And we don't rewrite our articles because there are complaints we are atheist, rightwing leftwing whatever. Dougweller (talk) 06:18, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
If you look at Creationism#Prevalence or the articles linked therein, you'll find several sources supporting the statement "Most Christians around the world today accept evolution as the most likely explanation for the origins of life, and do not take a literal view of the Genesis creation myth." Do you have any other specific complaints regarding NPOV? I don't mean to be blunt, but "I've heard more than one complaint that Wikipedia is atheist" is not, by itself, a sufficient reason to put a {{NPOV}} tag on the article. Gabbe (talk) 08:50, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- PCHS, I do not see how any of this has anything to do with atheism. Of course one can believe in God and also evolution, and reject the first two chapters of Genesis as not being a scientific (read, accurate) account of creation. In fact, the subject of the sentence you quote refers not to atheists but to Christians, so obviously all of them believe in God and are not atheists. Now, what is your point? Slrubenstein | Talk 16:29, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
- That's not my opinion (that WP is athiest); I'm going to play wise and keep my opinon out of the matter, but there are quite a few people who do say that Wikipedia is athiest based on this. PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 00:09, 11 December 2009 (UTC)
- Wikipedia needs to be atheist: if it used any religion as the basis for articles, it couldn't possible be neutral towards all religions.—Kww(talk) 00:47, 11 December 2009 (UTC)
- I think you mean 'agnostic', rather than atheist (which implies antagonism). rossnixon 01:20, 11 December 2009 (UTC)
- Give me a break. Ben (talk) 04:10, 11 December 2009 (UTC)
- "Atheist" doesn't imply antagonism.—Kww(talk) 04:22, 11 December 2009 (UTC)
- I think you mean 'agnostic', rather than atheist (which implies antagonism). rossnixon 01:20, 11 December 2009 (UTC)
- Wikipedia needs to be atheist: if it used any religion as the basis for articles, it couldn't possible be neutral towards all religions.—Kww(talk) 00:47, 11 December 2009 (UTC)
- That's not my opinion (that WP is athiest); I'm going to play wise and keep my opinon out of the matter, but there are quite a few people who do say that Wikipedia is athiest based on this. PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 00:09, 11 December 2009 (UTC)
- PCHS, I do not see how any of this has anything to do with atheism. Of course one can believe in God and also evolution, and reject the first two chapters of Genesis as not being a scientific (read, accurate) account of creation. In fact, the subject of the sentence you quote refers not to atheists but to Christians, so obviously all of them believe in God and are not atheists. Now, what is your point? Slrubenstein | Talk 16:29, 10 December 2009 (UTC)
PCHS-NJROTC: I'm not saying this is only your opinion. And you're perfectly welcome to criticise this article if you think it's got an atheist bias. But you have to bring specific, explicit suggestions for improvement. Something like: "I think this sentence in this paragraph should say such and such based on this and that reliable source". Vague and unattributed accusations like "there are quite a few people who do say that Wikipedia is athiest" is not likely to get this discussion anywhere. Gabbe (talk) 08:28, 11 December 2009 (UTC)
- Yawn... Many parts of the article are in fact neutral, but there are certain elements that seem to promote evolution. For example, intelligent design was apparently invented by a "politcally conservative think tank" and is not science according to the article. That's all good and well, but the evolution article implies that evolution by chance is uncontested science. Who's to say "chance" is real? Chance cannot be science as it cannot be proven to exist through scientific method, or at least not when considering evolution. It is impossible to prove that anything happens by chance rather than by God's will, therefore making chance in itself a religious belief. All of the explainations on the origins of species are merely inferences, not science or fact. It's all a hypothesis on history, not science. The evolutionary process is science however; evolution takes place and it is observed. I just think both sides of the issue should be addressed equally. Also, I do not believe that Wikipedia is atheist or I would not be here. PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 00:46, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
- Evolution is not a chance/random process and never will as long as natural selection is one of its main mechanism. I highly doubt the evolution article implies anything of the sort. Chance in science is meaningless, but there is a more rigorous similar concept known as the probability of an event happening or probability for short. If in "It is impossible to prove that anything happens by chance rather than by God's will, therefore making chance in itself a religious belief." you mean to use an event with random probability then it is well within the scientific "powers" to analyse and prove them. Many processes in science today are best explained when said probability is a random variable, see Brownian motion, so randomness is observed in the natural world with not problem. No faith required. If in the other hand by chance you mean simple probability, then using statistic and a large number (but not really that large) of data-points you can constraint the probability distribution of any given event to near 100% accuracy. Sadly this has nothing to do with evolution or for that matter with ID. --LexCorp (talk) 01:58, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
- Yep, but the wording is poor as I'm sure you will agree. It is inappropriate to write the word "chance" and wikilink it to probability. PCHS-NJROTC (Messages) 22:28, 14 December 2009 (UTC)
- PCHS-NJROTC: Actually, among present-day biologists, evolution is pretty much uncontested. WP:NPOV says (in WP:MNA, WP:UNDUE and WP:GEVAL) that we should describe the majority opinion as such. You are certainly right about "It is impossible to prove that anything happens by chance rather than by God's will". For example, if I throw a fair die many times, approximately one sixth of the time it will show a two. This is not a proof that the act of throwing a die is "random", an explanation that is just as possible is that God decides the outcome of every throw, and tomorrow God might make it so that all the dice of the world result in threes every time. However, the latter explanation goes against methodological naturalism, which is a cornerstone of the scientific method. And finally, just as LexCorp says, there are several driving processes behind evolution, two very important ones being genetic drift (which in some sense is "random") and natural selection (which certainly is not). Gabbe (talk) 10:25, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
- Evolution is not a chance/random process and never will as long as natural selection is one of its main mechanism. I highly doubt the evolution article implies anything of the sort. Chance in science is meaningless, but there is a more rigorous similar concept known as the probability of an event happening or probability for short. If in "It is impossible to prove that anything happens by chance rather than by God's will, therefore making chance in itself a religious belief." you mean to use an event with random probability then it is well within the scientific "powers" to analyse and prove them. Many processes in science today are best explained when said probability is a random variable, see Brownian motion, so randomness is observed in the natural world with not problem. No faith required. If in the other hand by chance you mean simple probability, then using statistic and a large number (but not really that large) of data-points you can constraint the probability distribution of any given event to near 100% accuracy. Sadly this has nothing to do with evolution or for that matter with ID. --LexCorp (talk) 01:58, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
- PCHS, you stated that the article was "promoting" the theory of evolution. Let us take another article, the one on gravitation, which states that, "Modern physics describes gravitation using the general theory of relativity, in which gravitation is a consequence of the curvature of spacetime which governs the motion of inertial objects." In truth, the mechanisms behind evolution are better understood than the mechanisms behind gravitation or curvature of spacetime. Yet no one argues that the article on gravitation is "promoting" the theory of gravitation. Someone could easily come along and say that gravity is the result of God's invisible hands deliberately pushing things together and any article that does not give equal weight to this "theory" is not neutral. But no one does. Why? Because a book written thousands of years ago does not say anything about gravity. Those who contest scientific views on the basis of religion will always decide that their argument is valid enough to be given weight in an encyclopedia. But for the encyclopedia to give in to these wishes would be the biased thing to do, for those views originate in a historically unscientific book and would not exist (as we see with gravitation) if that book did not mention the topic.
Furthermore, your comment that "chance is a religion" is a ridiculous Non sequitur that makes no sense as no clear-thinking scientist would argue that "luck" (which is what you decided was an appropriate synonym to chance) exists. As stated, the mechanisms behind evolution are more well understood than ID-supporters would have you believe (see the above arguments by Gabbe and LexCorp). from hajatvrc with WikiLove @ 01:11, 17 December 2009 (UTC)
- PCHS, you stated that the article was "promoting" the theory of evolution. Let us take another article, the one on gravitation, which states that, "Modern physics describes gravitation using the general theory of relativity, in which gravitation is a consequence of the curvature of spacetime which governs the motion of inertial objects." In truth, the mechanisms behind evolution are better understood than the mechanisms behind gravitation or curvature of spacetime. Yet no one argues that the article on gravitation is "promoting" the theory of gravitation. Someone could easily come along and say that gravity is the result of God's invisible hands deliberately pushing things together and any article that does not give equal weight to this "theory" is not neutral. But no one does. Why? Because a book written thousands of years ago does not say anything about gravity. Those who contest scientific views on the basis of religion will always decide that their argument is valid enough to be given weight in an encyclopedia. But for the encyclopedia to give in to these wishes would be the biased thing to do, for those views originate in a historically unscientific book and would not exist (as we see with gravitation) if that book did not mention the topic.
- If you understand the purpose of this talk/discussion page it is not for debate of the topic - but for constructive critique of the text itself. The term "myth" should be changed to "story" to remain neutral. There has been much debate here on the meaning of the term "myth" and that is the point. Why make it confusing or misleading to the reader? Debate or not the definition in Merriam-Webster uses terms such as ostensible, imaginary, and unverifiable. Clearly this definition is the source of the debate. Just change it to "story" to avoid unnecessary argumentation. This is not the forum for that - the page should be neutral and the word "myth" is not neutral. Toneron2 (talk) 06:29, 17 December 2009 (UTC)
Seeking consensus to change "myth" to "story"
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There is so much debate here about using the word "myth". This ends up being a debate about Creationism itself which is clearly outside the stated scope of talk: pages. The definition in Merriam-Webster uses terms such as ostensible, imaginary, and unverifiable. Clearly this definition is the source of the debate. Why can't we change it to the neutral term "story"? Toneron2 (talk) 06:41, 17 December 2009 (UTC)
Ugh, I am so tired of this idiotic debate. let me sum things up so that everyone can see the level that wikipedia has sunk to.
I say that there's a certain acuity in that because there's really no reason not to change the word 'myth' to the word 'story' (the terms are used interchangeably in academic research) except to rub a few christian noses in it. and FYI, no, I'm not a creationist - I'm not even a Christian in the way most people mean the word, and I think creationism as a whole is a misguided effort. but even I can see the pettiness of this. But no one is going to make any headway on this issue, ever. scientific zealots (definition of zealot: a person who is fanatical and uncompromising in the pursuit of their ideals) are just as intractable as religious zealots, and a good deal more smug about it. and they have certain advantages on wikipedia in terms of policy. sad, but true. so long as they want to be petty, they can continue to be petty, and there's nothing to do but deal with it. --Ludwigs2 22:28, 20 December 2009 (UTC)
Great. I think there was consensus to add an entry in the FAQ for this article that says something like "Myth, in this context, means a sacred narrative" (per Hajatvrc's note above). Or better yet I like the whole definition the Hajatvrc provided which to me sums up a perfect definition of Creationism: "a sacred narrative explaining how the world and humankind came to be." Toneron2 (talk) 03:13, 21 December 2009 (UTC)
:Only one statement you made there was a logical follow-through to anything I've said: "they must accept that their belief can be categorized as a myth." A myth "is a sacred narrative explaining how the world and humankind came to be in their present form." Genesis "is a sacred narrative explaining how the world and humankind came to be in their present form." Thus, the story behind their beliefs is a myth. It is a very simple, factual concept. Again, it has nothing to do with the legitimacy or illegitimacy of their beliefs. My arguement goes no further than this, and the connections you made, claiming that they are ideas that necessarily follow my argument, are not logical. "I don't see how you can separate the act of being offended from the thing they are offended about." Again, from here the only argument that can be made (which we WERE discussing and yet somehow you found it necessary to claim I am trying to dictate that a Christian is wrong to take Genesis literally) is whether or not we should consent to the using of a sub-par word in order to protect people from their own misconception that the better word claims falsity in their ideology. From your perspective, it is not worth people misunderstanding our proper usage. From mine, we should provide them with the proper usage, explain to them why it is proper, and then allow them to choose whether or not to still be offended. Again, if someone still chooses to be offended by a word on grounds that are false (i.e. the grounds that the word claims falsity in their beliefs), then that is their choice. There is no reason why an encyclopedia should do anything but provide the fact (which is that mythology does not claim falsity), because that is what an encyclopedia exists for: to provide facts. Notice I did not make any claim here about the Genesis creation myth being fact or fiction. There is no reason to bring that into the argument. This will be my last post in this discussion. If you look at my talk page I already have people warning me that you are just trolling (i.e. arguing for the sake of being an ass) and to ignore you. While I can't make any judgment about your intentions, this discussion has run out of all use. I'll see you around, I'm sure. from hajatvrc with WikiLove @ 07:37, 21 December 2009 (UTC)
How about Legend instead of Myth. according to Meriam Webster Dictionary and Wikitionarythis is an acceptable synonym of the word myth without the negative connotation.Big Roger (talk) 04:15, 21 December 2009 (UTC)
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The second sentence is awkward and imprecise
I find the second sentence--in particular, its first clause--terribly awkward and slightly misleading:
However the term is more commonly used to refer to religiously motivated rejection of certain biological processes
The use of 'however' and the comparative 'more' imply that common usage contradicts the meaning given in the previous sentence. It would be more accurate to regard common usage as being more restrictive (that is, limiting the range possible meanings) or particular.
Also, doesn't "used to refer to religiously motivated rejection" read a bit awkwardly? Every time I read it, I expect "religiously motivated rejection" to be preceded by the definite article ("the religiously motivated rejection") or be pluralized ("religiously motivated rejections"), but perhaps this is idiosyncratic.
I also think that it is not particularly encyclopedic to impute motives. Better to say that creationism has religious grounds.
Finally, I think it slightly imprecise to say that creationism rejects biological processes. It doesn't reject the processes so much as it denies they exist. 'Rejection' is ambiguous, because one could conceivably reject evolution without rejecting it exists. (For example, someone might labor to counteract the effects of natural selection on ethical grounds.) It would therefore be more appropriate, in my opinion, to say that creationism is the rejection of biological explanations.
This article has undergone quite a bit of scrutiny, so I decided against making any edits myself before consulting other editors. If I were to edit the article, I would rephrase the second sentence as follows:
Most commonly, the term is used to refer to the denial, on religious grounds, that biological processes (most commonly, evolution) could† provide an adequate account for the history, diversity, and complexity of life on earth.
† I wrote could provide because creationism is not merely unsatisfied with biology as it stands, but is rather in principle opposed to the notion that biology could adequately account for the origin of life, etc.
I realize my proposed edit may come across as somehow soft on creationism. For the record, I'm a militant atheist. My points are motivated purely by concerns over style and precision. Comments are very welcome. Ori.livneh (talk) 09:31, 25 January 2010 (UTC)
- First of all, let me commend you on taking your issue to the article talk page first, in a civil fashion. Quite a rarity regarding these articles. Secondly, having read through your comment I find your argument very persuasive and I agree completely with your suggestion. My suggestion is waiting a day or two to see if some objections pop up, and then do they alteration you propose. Gabbe (talk) 09:39, 25 January 2010 (UTC)
- Ori, well explained. I don't think anyone would argue with your proposed edit. Go for it. And regarding the 'militant atheism', if I may offer a gentle poke... "get well soon!" ;-) rossnixon 02:11, 26 January 2010 (UTC)
- I agree with both your logic and proposed solution, with one caveat--I would propose changing "could" to "are able to", so as not to give the impression that biological processes are a speculative explanation of life. Throwaway85 (talk) 11:13, 2 February 2010 (UTC)
- Have put in the proposed sentence, with only minor grammar changes. rossnixon 01:51, 9 February 2010 (UTC)
- The flow is a little off: "most commonly" is used twice in the sentence. Perhaps the second (parenthetical) use could be changed to "for example" or "especially"? 71.234.215.133 (talk) 12:31, 17 February 2010 (UTC)
- Changed one 'most commonly' => usually. rossnixon 02:14, 18 February 2010 (UTC)
- The flow is a little off: "most commonly" is used twice in the sentence. Perhaps the second (parenthetical) use could be changed to "for example" or "especially"? 71.234.215.133 (talk) 12:31, 17 February 2010 (UTC)
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