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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 12:08, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • "It is located in Dalton, on a site where paper been manufactured since the early 19th century." - had been manufactured.
History
  • In addition to running Crane & Co. during the late 19th century, Murray Crane served as Governor of Massachusetts and in the United States Senate, and played an influential role in Republican Party politics. Remove and between Mass. and in.
    • I've done some rewording here, but I think both "and"s are necessary: the first for the compound object of "served", the second for separating the verb clauses of "served" and "played". Magic♪piano 00:42, 28 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Description
Thank you for taking the time to review this; let me know if there are more issues. Magic♪piano 00:42, 28 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Article looks fine for GA, has all the major points and is short and concise. Nice job.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 07:27, 30 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]