Talk:Courage C60

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 21:44, 28 May 2015 (UTC)

I'll give this a review; it's been waiting long enough. Wizardman 21:44, 28 May 2015 (UTC)

@Wizardman: - any progress on this? :) Lukeno94 (tell Luke off here) 13:23, 5 June 2015 (UTC)

• I'll knock this out either tonight or Sunday. Alas been busy this week. Wizardman 22:40, 5 June 2015 (UTC)

Here's the issues I found:

• "The Courage C60 was a Le Mans Prototype" I'd put (LMP) next to it just so that when LMP is used later on lay readers get where the abbreviation is from.
• "and it was in this format that the C60 had its most success" feels worded a little oddly at the end, not sure how I'd reword it though.
• "similar to that found on open-wheel racing car at the front of the car," on an open-wheel
• Double check comma usage in the second half of Design particularly, but throughout the article as well; there's quite a few extra commas that aren't needed.
• "Boullion partnered Rédon to fourth place, and the fastest of the non-Audi entries." rm and
• " previous one; by winning the 1000 km" should be comma instead of semicolon
• Overall, the article feels on the repetitive side, since the second half is essentially just noting places in races. Not really a GA issue granted, and given the subject matter I'm not sure myself how to make it flow better without losing the encyclopedic nature. I would work on that before any attempt at FAC, though.

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 23:43, 7 June 2015 (UTC)

• OK, Wizardman, I think I've done the things you've requested. I don't intend to take this to FAC, mainly because it's a step too far for my writing abilities. :) Lukeno94 (tell Luke off here) 00:13, 8 June 2015 (UTC)

Fixes look good, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 01:54, 8 June 2015 (UTC)

• Thanks. :) Lukeno94 (tell Luke off here) 08:43, 8 June 2015 (UTC)

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