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Reviewer: Binksternet (talk · contribs) 04:40, 12 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Response

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I made all the revisions you recommended, hopefully they are to your liking. I clarified the protest situation at UC Berkeley, reworded the parts about Melton's activty at the Jabberwock, choose your second recommendation on how to simplify the wording, and added "side of the EP". I am a little confused by what you mean by the URL trimming, so I did not make the change out of fear of messing up the current references. Any other changes you want I will try to accommodate.TheGracefulSlick (talk) 03:12, 15 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Great! I'm going to keep reviewing. Binksternet (talk) 23:05, 17 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Review continued