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What does the article (or section) do well? - this is pretty early in the stages, but it looks like a good start!

What changes would you suggest overall? - you need more content and more sections. Please flush it out.

What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? - see above comment

Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know! - I have not but I look forward to reading more and seeing what this page turns into


I like the proposed format of a description along with showing some programs that fall under the umbrella of community crime prevention. Other than finishing the article, it would be good to switch out the bolded headings for the formatted headings in Wikipedia. I would also love to see links to other pages as your work progresses and the opportunities to add them arises. Cmac175 (talk) 14:17, 21 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for this new article. Note that other editors have raised some issues about the way it is written. For pointers, follow the links in the notice at the top of the page..

---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 20:19, 3 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]