Talk:Commerce Square

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Date	Process	Result
March 5, 2010	Good article nominee	Listed
March 21, 2010	Featured article candidate	Not promoted

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Mephiston999 (talk) 18:29, 3 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Done Change United States to USA in both the first sentence and in the infobox, and link the one in the first sentence.
Done Delete the caption of the image in the infobox.
Done Construction of the first phase, which included One Commerce Square, the plaza and retail space began in 1985 and was finished in 1987. The second phase of the project, Two Commerce Square did not begin until a lead tenant was secured for the building in 1990. ..... Construction of the first phase, which included One Commerce Square, the plaza and retail space, began in 1985 and was finished in 1987. The second phase of the project, Two Commerce Square, did not begin until a lead tenant was secured for the building in 1990.
Done Consolidated Rail Corporation (Conrail) ..... do not link the part in the brackets.
Done No other office skyscraper would be built in Philadelphia until the Cira Centre in 2005. ..... No other office skyscraper was built in Philadelphia until the Cira Centre in 2005.
Done A sentence should be added to describe the current tenants.

History

Done IBM would also serve as the lead tenant for One Commerce Square ..... IBM also served as the lead tenant for One Commerce Square
Done Construction began on the first phase of the project on June 10, 1985. The first phase of the project included One Commerce Square, retail and restaurant space, a plaza, and an underground parking garage. ...... reverse the order of these two sentences, first the reader has to find out was phase one is and then when it started.
Done Again de-link (Conrail).
Done Conrail starting seeking proposals ..... Conrail started seeking proposals
Done Now with a lead tenant, ground broke on the identical tower in July 1990. ..... With a lead tenant, construction of the identical tower was able to start in July 1990.
Done In 1996 Maguire-Thomas Partners split leaving Commerce Square owned by Thomas Properties Group Inc...... In 1996, Maguire-Thomas Partners split, leaving the owneship of Commerce Square to Thomas Properties Group Inc alone.
Done of space was subleased offsetting the cost ..... comma after subleased

Architecture

Tenants

link accounting and consulting to their respective articles.
Done With the multimedia company's move into the tower, Two Commerce Square's occupancy now stands at 91 percent. ..... With the multimedia company's move into the tower, Two Commerce Square's occupancy reached 91 percent.

Miscellaneous

Done Maguire Thomas Partners orMaguire-Thomas Partners , be consistent
Done Split the references in two colomns
Done Check ref 18
Done Check ref 19
Done Check ref 24

Minor and very few issues to be solved in order for me to pass this article as GA. I shall be helping out in the process as well.Mephiston999 (talk) 20:04, 3 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

All issues have been addressed, I'll pass it to GA status.Mephiston999 (talk) 14:31, 5 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review. Also thank you for addressing the issues you had with the article, I didn't have time until today. Medvedenko (talk) 16:43, 5 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]