Talk:Coming Up to Breathe/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 03:47, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   Failing article solely because the prose (and WP:MOS issues) is not up to GA standards. Here are a few examples (these are just a few, there maybe even more)

• Coming Up to Breathe is the fifth major label, full-length studio album from MercyMe.
• Released in on April 25, 2006,
• Coming Up to Breathe received almost universally positive reviews from critics
• "Something Like You" has been compared to the sound of U2 (particularly the song "Where The Streets Have No Name"),[6] while "3:42 a.m. (Writer's Block)" has been described as 'soulful classic rock'

1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   "Background" has basically every period cited with FN#1 which makes the article look even more clumsy

2. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   Saying "Coming Up to Breathe received almost universally positive reviews." is being biased

4. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   Active users have been reverting vandalism, which was last done back in mid November 2011

5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   File:Mercyme cutb.jpg does not comply with WP:NFCC; its rational is very very weak and does not give a suitable reasoning on why a non-free artwork gives any educational value. The second file completely fails WP:NFCC.

6. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   I suggest you fixed all of these concerns, get it copy edited, allow others to give it a WP:PR and then re-nominate at a later date. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 23:23, 27 December 2011 (UTC)