Talk:Colton Sissons/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 16:58, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

"Predators American Hockey League" → "Predators' American Hockey League" Done
I really hate how adding "Canada" makes the infobox so wide, but I know that someone will add it back even if you or I remove that
- Ditto. The worse is when someone is from PEI. It stretches it out so far.

Early life

Comma after "North Vancouver, British Columbia" per MOS:GEOCOMMA Done

Playing career

Amateur

"forgo his NCAA eligibility by signing with them." Done
Comma after "Westside Warriors" Done
"Sissons'" → "Sissons's" per MOS:'S Done
Specify first year of NHL draft eligibility, since the junior clubs also do drafts Done
Comma after "for the 2012-13 season" Done
Link "Team Canada's national junior team" to Canada men's national junior ice hockey team Done

Professional

"Predators 2013" → "Predators' 2013" Done
Comma after "Admirals coach Dean Evason" Done
Link AHL All-Star Game Done
Link first instance of "rating" to plus-minus Done
Use some synonym in "His assist marked" to avoid repetition of "assist" in the sentence Done
"coaching chance" → "coaching change" Done
Link "captain" to Captain (ice hockey) Done
"Predators opening goal" → "Predators' opening goal" Done
"Predators organizations" → "Predators organization" Done
Comma after "for the 2016 Stanley Cup playoffs" Done
Link exhibition game Done
"Predators fourth-line" → "Predators' fourth-line" Done
Might want to clarify that this meant Sissons was exposed for the Knights to potentially take Done
No commas in "reached, at least, the 15-point mark" Done
Mention some sentence that he was invited to the bubble Done
"Nick Cousins' goal" → "Nick Cousins's goal" per MOS:'S Done
"Predaots" → "Predators" Done
"400th career NHL game ~~with the Predators~~." We know that's the only team for which he's played Done

Awards and honours

Good

References

Per MOS:ALLCAPS, [5] and [56] should be in title case Done
North Shore News, Kelowna Capital News, and The Tennessean should be work param, not publisher Done
Add "|url-access=limited" to the Tennessean refs Done

General comments

Images are properly licensed and relevant
No stability concerns in the revision history
Earwig score looks good, top result is a mirror site

Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. As always, ping me with questions and let me know when you're finished. — Ghost River 00:37, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GhostRiver, done! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:41, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for working so quickly, happy to pass! — Ghost River 16:00, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]