Talk:Cloak n Dagger

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Review: January 5, 2025. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Cloak n Dagger appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 7 February 2025 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the Airbnb homestay where a song was recorded by Glaive and Ericdoa was dubbed by fans as the "Hyperpop Hype House"?

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GA Review

Passed. Medxvo (talk) 20:24, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Locust member (talk · contribs) 01:34, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 19:44, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"and Ericdoa, from their collaborative extended play (EP) Then I'll ..." - I think the comma should be removed before "from" and added before "Then ..."
- Y
"a "woozy" instrumental ..." - quotations in lead must have a source to support them even if they're stated and sourced in prose, so I suggest replacing with a synonym such as hazy perhaps ...?
- Y didn't know about this rule, so thanks for this. Changed to what was recommended.
I suggest separating the lead into two paragraphs, with the second paragraph starting with "It is a fast-paced ....", because all of these information in one paragraph is a bit too much
- Y
I also suggest separating the background section into two paragraphs, with the second one starting with "On the day of its release ..."
- Y
The "Background" section can be named "Background and release" since it has details about the release
- Y
"They also recorded a music video ..." - "Glaive and Ericdoa also recorded a music video ...", since the preceding sentence talks about fans not them
- Y
I suggest using this source and this source after "served as the lead single" to satisfy the WP:SINGLE? criteria
- Y

Another Locust member nom! Everything else looks good to me, I'll put this On hold for now. I also have two GANs, "A Place in This World" and "Coney Island (Taylor Swift song)", I would appreciate your comments anytime if you're interested ... :)) Medxvo (talk) 19:44, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for always giving such quick reviews! I was able to knock these out in no time so this is probably an earlier response than you expected lol. I think I'll be able to give one of your articles a review by tomorrow, I did see that you submitted these earlier today. Thanks again! Locust member (talk) 20:07, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the quick response as well! The citing quotations in lead thing can be seen at WP:WHENNOTCITE and WP:LEADCITE if you want further details, sorry for not giving these links earlier. I'll ✓ Pass the article now, congratulations! Medxvo (talk) 20:24, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 20:58, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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... that the Airbnb homestay where a song was recorded by Glaive and Ericdoa was dubbed by fans as the "Hyperpop Hype House"?

Source: Pitchfork

ALT1: ... that fans of Glaive and Ericdoa dubbed the Airbnb recording location of a song as the "Hyperpop Hype House"? Source: Pitchfork
ALT2: ... that fans of Glaive and Ericdoa dubbed the recording location of "Cloak n Dagger" as the "Hyperpop Hype House"? Source: Pitchfork
Reviewed:

Improved to Good Article status by Locust member (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Locust member (talk) 20:48, 5 January 2025 (UTC).[reply]

New enough GA. Nominator is QPQ exempt. The hook fact is correct and in article. I am concerned, and this is for the promoter, about a MOS:SEAOFBLUE issue with both "Hyperpop" and "Hype House" linked, and I really do not know how to resolve it as both seem to need linking. A second issue could be resolved by unlinking "homestay" in ALT0. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:41, 12 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
- I did think about that, but I believe per WP:SEAOFBLUE it could pass as it only states "When possible, do not place links next to each other", though in this case, it would not be possible, as the source states it in this way. I agree that "homestay" could be unlinked in ALT0 (didn't even catch the sea of blue error in the article), but I don't think we can do much about it in the quotes.
  - Adding a note that the hook fact is indeed inline-cited in this article. I've gone ahead and unlinked "homestay" in ALT0. We may be stuck with the SEAOFBLUE for "Hyperpop Hype House" if that is indeed the case, since we are using a quote. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:57, 15 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]