Talk:ClariS/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 20:58, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

• the prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct; and

it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.

• • I would argue that the lead should expanded to at least two paragraphs based on the body's size.
• Verifiable with no original research:
• all in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines;
  • There are some sentences like ""True Blue" is a cover of Zone's 2003 single." and "ClariS released their fourth studio album Fairy Castle on January 25, 2017." that need referencing.
• Broad in its coverage:

it addresses the main aspects of the topic; and it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).

• Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
• Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
• Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:

media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content; and media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.

• • Is the second image that important? I fail to see it's importance because the illustrator does not have his own article.

Other than that, I feel ClariS is in good shape to become a GA. I'll gladly pass it once these issues are solved.Tintor2 (talk) 20:58, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

Sorry for the late reply, but I suppose the second image is important, as it illustrates the time when ClariS' members consisted of Clara and Alice, as opposed to the current lineup of Clara and Karen. I'll try to address the other issues within the next few days. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 06:53, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

@Narutolovehinata5: Don't worry but remember to ping or mention me in case I don't see the reply in the watchlist.Tintor2 (talk) 23:37, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

I've now sourced the two unsourced statements, and expanded the lead to include mentions of their live performances and their not showing their faces in public (arguably their trademark). Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 01:51, 1 June 2018 (UTC)

@Narutolovehinata5: Passing the article. Good work.Tintor2 (talk) 15:43, 1 June 2018 (UTC)