Talk:Clarence McGeary/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:34, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:34, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• to late to be eligible to the first "to" should be "too"
• He returned to the Bison in 1948 and played end. He moved from end to center in the 1949 season. probably an opportunity to combine these two sentences to soften up the short, choppiness
• Fargo, North Dakota need a comma after North Dakota
• but choose to remain -> "chose"
• Bismarck, North Dakota need a comma after North Dakota
• Ref spot check: #4, 5, 11, 17, 21, 22

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:22, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

• @Gonzo fan2007: Issues addressed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:54, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:20, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.