Talk:Clara Schilke/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Riley1012 (talk) 02:00, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Hameltion (talk · contribs) 15:26, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 19:24, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I will complete this review within one week. -Riley1012 (talk) 19:24, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

1. Well-written

Florida State won five ACC tournaments and two NCAA championships during Schilke's seven years with the team from 2016 to 2022. I would move this to the end of the section to summarize her career
- Took out; instead split across lede and honors sections. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 01:51, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

2. Verifiable
The article uses reliable sources- her own Instagram post is fine per WP:BLPSPS. Career statistics section supported by External links. Passes Copyvio check. Spot check: 2, 4, 5, 8, 13, 17.

Sources needed in the Honors section
- Added. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 01:51, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

3. Broad

Is there any information on her recruitment- why she chose FSU, other offers, etc.?
- Only found this which shows she committed by Feb 2015 but not specific enough to be worth adding. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 01:51, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Is there anything else that could possibly be added to the personal life section? Do we know what she is doing post-retirement?
- Haven't seen anything since the press release. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 01:51, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
She redshirted her first year, then regularly started as a redshirt freshman in 2017. Do we know why she took the redshirt year? Also, could you add more details about her redshirt freshman year- number of appearances, notable games, etc?
- Didn't find for first redshirt; added a bit to redshirt freshman year. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 01:51, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
She earned her master's degree in exercise physiology in December 2021. I'm assuming she also earned a bachelor's degree, add that information too.
- Added. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 01:51, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

4. Neutral
The article is neutral

5. Stable
The article is stable.

6. Illustrated
Both images are free use, are relevant, and have suitable captions.

@Hameltion: I'm done with my review, and my suggestions are in bullet points. Let me know if you have any questions! -Riley1012 (talk) 20:37, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Riley1012: Thanks for the review. Addressed your comments. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 01:51, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hameltion: Okay, the changes look good to me, I will pass this. -Riley1012 (talk) 02:00, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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