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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:31, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 13:31, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wikilink the seasons of Lines' clubs to their respective articles where applicable
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "and was a key first team player as the "Owls" won promotion to the Championship at the end of the 2011–12 campaign." - try not to use nicknames for the teams
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Bristol Rovers

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  • "before graduating through the Bristol Rovers-backed Bristol Academy of Sport at South Gloucestershire and Stroud College." - the part about Lines going to South Gloucestershire and Stroud College needs to be verified with another source
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "After two further substitute appearances in League Two," - needs verification
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "After three appearances in the 2006–07 campaign, he featured in six matches from March onwards," - needs to be verified by a reliable source
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "as the "Pirates" won promotion with a 3–1 victory over Shrewsbury Town at Wembley." - avoid using team nicknames
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He put in an "excellent" performance" - according to whom?
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "as Rovers beat Premier League Fulham on penalties in the Third Round on 22 January, " - beat Premier League side Fulham
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He scored his first goal in competitive football on 29 December, heading in the first goal of a 3–0 home win" - repetition of "goal"
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He played 48 games in the 2008–09 season," - needs verifying with a reliable source
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In total he scored ten goals in 46 appearances in the 2009–10 campaign." - same issue as above
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He was sidelined for two weeks with a toe injury in February 2011," - needs to be reworded to pass WP:LIMITED
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Lines had a seven-day trial period with Championship side Crystal Palace" - clarify that this trial saw Lines train with Crystal Palace
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "in the summer." - avoid using seasons per MOS:SEASON
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Sheffield Wednesday

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  • "Lines joined League One club Sheffield Wednesday on a three-year contract for a £50,000 fee." - another source will be needed to go with the BBC Sport citation that mentions the contract was for three years since the former does not mention that fact
Done.----EchetusXe 12:52, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He went on to score four goals in 47 appearances in the 2011–12 campaign as the "Owls" secured promotion with a second-place finish," - needs to be verified by a reliable source
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Also in the above sentence, the nickname of Sheffield Wednesday does not need to be mentioned
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He featured in 18 games for the "Dons"," - needs verifying with a reliable source and please do not use team nicknames
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Port Vale

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  • "on a one-year deal in July 2013." - rewrite the text in bold so it is not too similar to the text in The Sentinel
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He went on to build an impressive partnership" - the word highlighted in bold is non-neutral
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "in midfield with Anthony Griffith; Griffith providing the tough-tackling and Lines providing the creative playmaking." - try not to begin the start of the following sentence like this
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He signed a new two-year contract in the summer." - writing out the seasons in discouraged per MOS:SEASON
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "being named on the Football League team of the week" - Team of the Week
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Return to Bristol Rovers

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  • "the club had fallen out of the English Football League in his absence, but were top of the Conference Premier division" - not mentioned by BBC Sport
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "with a strike from 25-yards in a 1–0 victory" - use the convert template on the text highlighted in bold
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "as he embarked on a run from deep before calmly tucking the ball beyond "Gills" goalkeeper Jonathan Bond." - please don't use club nicknames
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he admitted to getting into vegetarianism" - becoming a vegetarian
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "and was subsequently given abuse on social media by some of the club's supporters." - abused by some of the club's supporters on social media.
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He ended the 2017–18 season with five goals in 47 appearances as Rovers posted a 13th-place finish in League One." - needs to be verified by a reliable source
Done.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "However he lost his first team place after Graham Coughlan replaced Clarke as manager in December." - what was the reason for the falling out?
I've added some detail.--EchetusXe 13:41, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Lines ended his second spell with his boyhood club having made 348 appearances, scoring 34 goals and having achieved three promotions during his two spells at the club." - not mentioned by the two sources placed at the end of this portion of text
Done.EchetusXe 16:18, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Northampton Town

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  • ""Cobblers" manager Keith Curle said that "I think his attributes will really help us"." - no using a club's nickname
Done.--EchetusXe 12:52, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the fifth promotion of Lines’ career." - not mentioned by BBC Sport
Done.--EchetusXe 12:52, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Style of play

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  • "He is considered to be a set-piece specialist." - considered by whom?
Done.--EchetusXe 12:52, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Career statstics

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  • The table header has a spelling error in "spperances" which should be spelt Apperances
Done.--EchetusXe 12:52, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • The four notes accompanying the table all need to be verified by a reliable source
Done.EchetusXe 16:18, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  • All the hyphens located in the spaces of the texts and the scores should be replaced by en dashes (–) per MOS:DASH
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • The author of Reference 18 Daniel Jones should be formatted as Jones, Daniel in the appropriate fields
Done.--EchetusXe 16:28, 29 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 37 "Rob Page says no excuses for Chris Lines after red card"" needs to have its archive url fixed because it links to an error page
Done.--EchetusXe 12:03, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 43 is dead and will need to be archived or replaced to verify the information it supports
Done.--EchetusXe 12:03, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 44 "Bristol Rovers 1-0 Cardiff City: Bluebirds booted out of EFL Cup by Chris Lines stunner at the Memorial Stadium" is missing the author
Done.--EchetusXe 12:52, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 45 "Chelsea 3-2 Bristol Rovers: Michy Batshuayi scores twice as Blues reach EFL Cup third round" should include the author
Done.--EchetusXe 12:52, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 57 "YOUR VIEW: Best player, best goal, best signing and more - Cobblers fans choose their award winners for 2019/20"" - no using all capital letters per MOS:ALLCAPS
Done.--EchetusXe 12:52, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 59 "Chris hopes to get along the right Lines in loan spell" needs archiving
Done.--EchetusXe 12:52, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 60 "Vale sign Sheffield Wednesday midfielder" is missing the date it was published
Done.--EchetusXe 12:52, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • References 75, 76, 77, 78 and 79 should have an up-to-date access date and not an incorrect one of 1 January 2017
Done.--EchetusXe 12:52, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 15:02, 26 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Okay I have addressed those points. Thanks.--EchetusXe 16:18, 1 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I've not tried pinging someone before but I'll give it a go now... @MWright96: EchetusXe 10:46, 6 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@EchetusXe: Now promoting to GA class MWright96 (talk) 21:03, 6 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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