Talk:Chikurubi Prison
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Needs a rewrite
[edit]No doubt this is a noteworthy encyclopaedia entry, but in its current form it is written like a call to activism instead of a factual description.
Suggestions:
- The body should be split into paragraphs, and should only report facts.
- There should be more citations (if possible).
- Moral judgements should not be part of the article.
- FMalan (talk) 14:31, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
- I created this as a stub, but haven't been back here for quite a while. The text that's been added since them looks to be a copyvio of this webpage, so I think we should revert back to my original. Hopefully someone with more knowledge on the subject can expand it further.