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Review: September 10, 2017. (Reviewed version).

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A fact from Cherry on Top appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 21 July 2017 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the music video for Oh Land's "Cherry on Top" is intended to serve as the first of three short films directed by Duncan Winecoff?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2017/July. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Cherry on Top.

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GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:13, 3 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

and produced by → I think "while production was handled by" sounds better here, but it's your choice

Done

A corresponding music video → "accompanying" would fit better here

Done

and released on 20 April 2014 → and premiered simultaneously with the single's release

Done

Infobox

Flawless ;)

Background and composition

and produced by → same as in the lead

Done

high-tempo → uptempo

Done

Critical reception

and "3 Chances" → and album track "3 Chances" (for context)

Done

calling it party of Wish Bone's "magically imaginative mental joyride" → I don't really know what "party" should mean here

Done – fixed; my bad. Carbrera (talk) 22:15, 9 September 2017 (UTC).[reply]

He liked that the song "display[ed] → say "recording" here for alternation

Done

Music video

the cinematography was orchestrated by → "orchestrated" is the wrong word here

Done

Were the three short films eventually made? If not, you can state at the very end of the paragraph something like: "Plans remained unmaterialized"

Done

Personnel

from Wish Bone liner notes → from the liner notes of Wish Bone

Done

Other stuff

Copy-violation

31.0% is super!

References

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

Outcome

On hold for 7 days. Great job! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:57, 4 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Cartoon network freak – All done. Thank you very much. Carbrera (talk) 22:15, 9 September 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:26, 10 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.